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What If Life Could Change

What If Life Could Change?




 What if life could actually change?
 What if the world could be rearranged?
 What would us as people now see?
 Would it be the start of life or the end for me?

 If the oceans were red and the skies were green
 How would people discover the meaning within?
 Now you see life is an aspect all on its own
 It's a step by step process that takes years to grow

 Now some people say life's a mistake 
 But it was people who fixed up the breaks
 Now you might be wondering, would life really have been the same?
 No! because there's a difference between life and a game

 Because life goes on but a game could be played over
 Like something on the moon also known as a rover
 It goes to the moon and finds things it should
 Same thing with God giving us life, to obey him and do good

 Back to the point, life can't change
 Try what you want no day is the same
 So stop asking questions and start giving answers
 Because life will soon change so start to enhance it.


 Wian van Kraayenburg
 11 January 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2025 6:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:18:00 PM
WIAN, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:01:00 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Wian - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2015 8:50:00 PM
Wian Van,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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