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What If

What if I had listened from the start Would you have let me win your heart? What if I hadn't text or called Would you have even cared at all? What if I had left you to be alone Would your love for me have grown? What if in life we could turn back time Would you take me back an just be mine? What if we could fix are broken wound's Would are love be greatly resumed?

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Jean Murray

Date: 5/31/2016 6:14:00 PM

This reminds me of the saying "If you love something set it free. If it comes back to you, it's yours. If it doesn't...it never was." Perhaps you and she were never meant to last. I'm sorry this love seems doomed to be in the past. Why spell our as are?

Sincerely Bonapart

Date: 5/29/2016 12:34:00 PM

I felt like this a little while ago. Love is beautiful yet fickle beast.

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