What If

. * * * * If What if I'd been there Would I have seen Jesus ** as ** King Accepted **** Him Gave Him life's reign Would I give Him room Would I invite Him Into the inn's space What if I was there Would I even care xx XX X Reversed Diminished Hexaverse

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2014 8:46:00 AM

I love your poem, Sara. I've asked that same question of myself, even at Jesus Crucifixion. 7 Blessings and Merry Christmas

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/24/2014 9:58:00 AM

Eve, I have done the same wondering would I have been in the group of proud religious people who would have Him dead to keep things as they always were.. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2014 9:54:00 AM

Merry Christmas to you too!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2014 10:51:00 AM

A lovely poem, Sara, miss reading your poems. A very good WHAT IF, question. I wonder what would I do, if I was the one chasing a star.... Love this... LINDA

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/20/2014 1:18:00 AM

Very beautiful pen Sara! I enjoyed this pretty shape and content dear friend. A 7 for you! I wish you a very merry Christmas and your family! Have a nice weekend! Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2014 1:02:00 PM

- Sara, well written and an interesting question !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/19/2014 6:02:00 AM

I know you certainly would my dear friend Sara. What a beautiful poem masterfully created with reflective questions for us on this great season. I love it my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time reading one of my poems. Merry Christmas to you and your family/loved ones! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/18/2014 1:27:00 PM

An interesting question...beautifully done.

Emeka Offor

Date: 12/18/2014 4:26:00 AM

Would I even care? A question for the soul. Great write.....Emeka

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/17/2014 12:33:00 PM

beautifully composed, sara... if ever, i know you would have wanted to be there.. huggs

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/15/2014 6:12:00 PM

Well crafted Christmas write Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2014 12:18:00 AM

I know you and i am sure you would have!!! and you would today!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/14/2014 1:44:00 PM

Excellent work, Sara, and the shape is superb!! Questions like this I often ask myself, too...hugs, Rhonda

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/14/2014 12:38:00 PM

Questions we should all ask...good work! Sara!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/14/2014 9:41:00 AM

O what a wonderful Reversed Diminished Hexaverse Sara! Definitely a first-rated poem. So many questions, so many answers, so many beliefs, so many alternatives, history, geography. politics all rolled into this little poem. Your each word weighs tons.Thank you. Love. MERRY CHRISTMAS..rajat

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2014 6:20:00 AM

Wow this is so good Sara,, so full of meaning in those two words of your title..i know every time i see a beggar in the town square here in my own town,,and i walk past, even turn my head away,,,,What if! I think What if that was Jesus Christ come to test us here on earth,,,your poem as struck a chord in me Sara,,it truly has...

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/13/2014 7:00:00 PM

Many questions begging for answers,questions every Soul must ask; nicely crafted Sara,well done....huggs

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/13/2014 6:33:00 PM

good question Sara, will you tonight or tomorrow? I'd like to think so. nice write

David Meade

Date: 12/13/2014 4:49:00 PM

Wonderful -- You would have cared and taken them into the inn!

Jack Horne

Date: 12/13/2014 4:09:00 PM

yes, such thoughts have also come to me, my friend. Thanks very much - loved the contest