Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

What If

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                                                                 If
                                                            What if
                                                       I'd been there
                                                   Would I have seen
                                                  Jesus **  as ** King
                                                  Accepted ****   Him
                                                 Gave   Him   life's reign
                                                 Would I give Him  room
                                                 Would   I   invite    Him
                                                 Into   the   inn's  space
                                                 What   if   I   was there
                                                  Would   I   even   care
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                                                             XX X 


Reversed Diminished Hexaverse

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Eve Roper December 24, 2014 at 8:46 AM I love your poem, Sara. I've asked that same question of myself, even at Jesus Crucifixion. 7 Blessings and Merry Christmas Sara Kendrick December 24, 2014 at 9:58 AM Eve, I have done the same wondering would I have been in the group of proud religious people who would have Him dead to keep things as they always were.. Sara

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2014 at 9:54 AM Merry Christmas to you too!

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2014 at 10:51 AM A lovely poem, Sara, miss reading your poems. A very good WHAT IF, question. I wonder what would I do, if I was the one chasing a star.... Love this... LINDA

Dorian Petersen Potter December 20, 2014 at 1:18 AM Very beautiful pen Sara! I enjoyed this pretty shape and content dear friend. A 7 for you! I wish you a very merry Christmas and your family! Have a nice weekend! Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2014 at 1:02 PM - Sara, well written and an interesting question !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun December 19, 2014 at 6:02 AM I know you certainly would my dear friend Sara. What a beautiful poem masterfully created with reflective questions for us on this great season. I love it my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time reading one of my poems. Merry Christmas to you and your family/loved ones! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

M. L. Kiser December 18, 2014 at 1:27 PM An interesting question...beautifully done.

Emeka Offor December 18, 2014 at 4:26 AM Would I even care? A question for the soul. Great write.....Emeka

Nette Onclaud December 17, 2014 at 12:33 PM beautifully composed, sara... if ever, i know you would have wanted to be there.. huggs

Ken Carroll December 15, 2014 at 6:12 PM Well crafted Christmas write Sara!

Andrea Dietrich December 15, 2014 at 12:18 AM I know you and i am sure you would have!!! and you would today!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 14, 2014 at 1:44 PM Excellent work, Sara, and the shape is superb!! Questions like this I often ask myself, too...hugs, Rhonda

James Marshall Goff December 14, 2014 at 12:38 PM Questions we should all ask...good work! Sara!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 14, 2014 at 9:41 AM O what a wonderful Reversed Diminished Hexaverse Sara! Definitely a first-rated poem. So many questions, so many answers, so many beliefs, so many alternatives, history, geography. politics all rolled into this little poem. Your each word weighs tons.Thank you. Love. MERRY CHRISTMAS..rajat

Harry Horsman December 14, 2014 at 6:20 AM Wow this is so good Sara,, so full of meaning in those two words of your title..i know every time i see a beggar in the town square here in my own town,,and i walk past, even turn my head away,,,,What if! I think What if that was Jesus Christ come to test us here on earth,,,your poem as struck a chord in me Sara,,it truly has...

Kayod5 Kayode December 13, 2014 at 7:00 PM Many questions begging for answers,questions every Soul must ask; nicely crafted Sara,well done....huggs

Robert Stoner Jr December 13, 2014 at 6:33 PM good question Sara, will you tonight or tomorrow? I'd like to think so. nice write

David Meade December 13, 2014 at 4:49 PM Wonderful -- You would have cared and taken them into the inn!

Jack Horne December 13, 2014 at 4:09 PM yes, such thoughts have also come to me, my friend. Thanks very much - loved the contest