What If

What if, I could not see, would 
you sight the tree of life, for my 
being beauty, against the 
nurtured lands.

What if, I could not hear, would 
you listen, to the calmness, of 
the sea, to break it  through.

What if, I could not touch, 
would you be, my hands, of a 
soft silky pillow, to embrace 
me.

What if, I could not walk, would 
you be, that crutch, under-
wing, to head me to triumph, 
along the sand, one on one.

What if, I could not cry, would 
you, shed my tears, among 
yours, to drown them, in a 
whirl-pool.

What if, I had A broken heart, 
would you be, the one to heal, 
it's pain, and nurse it back to 
health, with a band aid.

What if, I was hungry, would 
you be, the one to feed, this 
starving soul, in A hopeful 
need, to guidance.

Just what if, I say to let it, all 
go, and hand Jesus the wheel... 

NUFF LUV to everyone who's doubted
The power of our Lord Jesus Christ, for he
Is Our rock, and savior to everlasting life, 
I adore thee....Amen

Carma Reed
June 3rd, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/8/2012 8:15:00 PM
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/8/2012 8:45:00 PM
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:59:00 PM
Amen and yes He will! Really well expressed.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 12/8/2012 8:47:00 PM
Yes amen Richard thank you for the comment always love Carma
Date: 11/11/2012 2:59:00 PM
Oh, it's very beautiful, Carma. You have a sweet spirit. Tender. Love it. Great write. So enjoyed!! Love ya, Toquyen
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/11/2012 7:32:00 PM
Thank You my dear Toquyen loved, loved your comment love always Carma
Date: 11/11/2012 11:42:00 AM
It had hosted a sad life Carma ..... without all the senses we have. - (But it is amazing to see how someone who is blind or deaf can use the senses that we never use.) - A good poem - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/11/2012 7:30:00 PM
Thank You My Dear Anne Lise, is very sad how we all sometimes take things for grant it, when there's ppl less fortunate... Was very touched by your comment thanks. Love always Carma
Date: 11/11/2012 11:36:00 AM
I absolutely love this poem, spool great, and our Lord and Savior is great and greatly to be praised. God bless
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/11/2012 7:19:00 PM
Thank You Gwen, God Bless You Too
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