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What I Wish For You My Friend

I wish you had the ocean, To match your eyes of blue I wish you could command the fish To do their best and live their truth. I wish you the best dreams The ones from which we never want to wake up I wish you had an inkling of the wonderfulness Others admire and respect in you I wish you to always stay innocent and fun, But I also wish you understood the reason people Adore you is not what you have done for them, But what you are constantly doing. I wish you knew the you That we know. I wish I could show you your reflection In a star

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Date: 3/31/2019 2:57:00 PM
A lovely tribute to anyone who wants to adopt it - beautiful caring words Caren. Well penned. Poetry hugs, Jenny
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Jenny. I just wanted to throw a good one down in honor of lots of my friends. Blue eyes was random.
Date: 3/31/2019 2:12:00 PM
oh how wonderful is this Caren what a super tribute and now wish I had blue eyes and it could be about me she says tongue in cheek but I will fave it anyway it is so uplifting-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Blue eyes was just a term. It could be hazel or green or brown or black or amber eyes too.
Date: 3/31/2019 2:08:00 PM
- You are a great friend ... many wonderful wishes for your friend :) - Uplifting and gives a good feeling to read, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/31/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. This was written for all of my friends, so you and Jenny and Jan can all accept it for yourselves.

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