Michael J. Falotico Poet Light Verse

"what I See"

You walk with such beauty and grace...
A radiant smile and a soft glow in your face..
But I see all thats behind that beauty of art..
Such inner amazement as sweet as a tart...
A heart of gold that never see's the bad...
Excepting my flaws and the crosses I had..
Behind your eyes a little girl still hides..
She comes out at times and never misses a stride..
Your mind and your soul created with love..
My heart still trembles and I flutter like a dove..
Your words and your dreams are a script to my mind..
Thats why there is much more then beauty, a women so kind..

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Doris Culverhouse May 9, 2010 at 4:28 PM enjoyed reading, great write

Dr.Ram Mehta May 9, 2010 at 3:01 AM She must have really walked in beauty and grace. Nice character-draw

Sara Kendrick May 8, 2010 at 1:26 PM Michael, this is great tribute to some woman somewhere...I hope that she has read it..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire May 8, 2010 at 8:27 AM When a woman accepts your flaws and stands by you through the tough times, she is truly a treasure. Very nice dedication to a special woman. Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo May 8, 2010 at 7:54 AM beautifully written and such a wonderful thing to share each other this way. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 8, 2010 at 5:27 AM such a sweet women, taking you into her life flaws and all, lucky to have each other, nicely done