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lying on the ground branches spread hugging the sun gathering its warm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/19/2024 5:56:00 AM
Hi Karen! This is a magnificent haikt haku! Do you mean its or it’s in last line? A tually, both ways might work? Love line 2. Nice to meet you!
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Karen Croft
Date: 8/19/2024 6:37:00 AM
Thank you. I will change it's!

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