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In your eyes there are many things I see There’s heartbreak and pain and a long dark night A beating heart of gold looking at me There is also beauty, a forceful light I see your strength, your spirit young and wild Your dedication for those that you love The forgotten dreams of your inner child How your eyes twinkle like the stars above I see your faded trust, lost through the years Your prison of doubt in the morning dew Turmoil and pain in many hidden tears But in all of this, I can still see you I see a soul that’s magical to me Each time that I look, this is what I see 6/22/2021 Contemporary Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 10/17/2021 7:43:00 AM
Lovely heartfelt poem Mark….you are quite the romantic. Debx
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Date: 6/29/2021 11:17:00 PM
I simply see a beautiful poem!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/1/2021 3:59:00 PM
Thanks Art!
Date: 6/27/2021 5:17:00 PM
Hello Mark … a fine sonnet dedicated to love and devotion - very good indeed Mark - Lindsay
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Mark Koplin
Date: 6/29/2021 10:52:00 AM
Thanks bud! I appreciate that!
Date: 6/22/2021 1:10:00 PM
what a charming sonnet mark, i have no idea what a contemporary sonnet is but this is delightful:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 6/22/2021 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Contemporary is basically two in the same time period.
Date: 6/22/2021 9:40:00 AM
What a lovely sonnet, Mark. In honor of your sweet wife?
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Mark Koplin
Date: 6/22/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, indeed.
Date: 6/22/2021 7:29:00 AM
Brilliant. Just love it. Wishing you a win ... God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Mark Koplin
Date: 6/22/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Gina! I appreciate that.
Date: 6/22/2021 7:08:00 AM
I see a soul that’s magical to me Great.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 6/22/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/22/2021 5:18:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Mark, they say the eyes are the window to the soul. Hope you're well and best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 6/22/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom! Good day to you.

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