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What I Gave

What I gave… My honesty, my loyalty My love, my heart My word and my time My trust when apart. What I gave... My full attention, my understanding My friendship, my care My support and compassion When no one else was there. What I gave… Everything he desired I always did my best To make sure he was comfortable And never made him stressed. I gave it my all, more that 100 percent to the one whose life, I thought I made content When I gave I expected nothing back But his loyalty and love in return I expect no extravagance But a flame that will eternally burn. When you find that special someone Your world changes around You give him wholeheartedly As you believe a soul mate you have found But in the end what I got Was the complete opposite of what I gave. I was left out in the cold alone, A dreadful storm I had to brave. What I got... Insincerity and distrust, Betrayal and deceit Bitterness, empty promises, And a heartless scheming cheat What I got.. A shattered heart, sleepless nights and a river of endless tears. Unsaid words which hurt the most, And a soul left broken into pieces... CONTEST: WHAT I GAVE .. SPONSOR: SHERI FRESONKE HARPER DATE: 27-06-2014

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Date: 7/21/2014 3:23:00 AM
loving the write.......
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 7/22/2014 3:40:00 AM
Thank You Patrick :)
Date: 7/14/2014 1:31:00 PM
Great expression of a great disappointment. Congratulations.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 7/15/2014 1:29:00 AM
Thank You :)
Date: 7/14/2014 9:43:00 AM
I really like this write of yours, Sasha! If you read my entry you'll notice the similarities. (mine is all imaginative). Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 7/15/2014 1:30:00 AM
Many Thanks Paul. :) Will definitely have a look
Date: 6/27/2014 10:18:00 PM
OH MY, this is a downright shame what happened to you. If this is all true, I feel bad for what happened with that guy. You wrote it very convincingly and it's a very good entry for this contest.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/28/2014 1:01:00 AM
Ahh its wat happened to a friend recently anx part of it is me as well . Thank you for ur well wishes :)
Date: 6/27/2014 6:05:00 AM
Very heartfelt and sad write. The last stanza tells it all, Sasha
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/27/2014 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram :)

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