What I Gave

What I gave… 
My honesty, my loyalty 
My love, my heart
My word and my time 
My trust when apart.

What I gave...
My full attention, my understanding
My friendship, my care
My support and compassion 
When no one else was there.

What I gave…
Everything he desired
I always did my best 
To make sure he was comfortable
And never made him stressed. 

I gave it my all, 
more that 100 percent 
to the one whose life,
I thought I made content
 
When I gave I expected nothing back
But his loyalty and love in return
I expect no extravagance
But a flame that will eternally burn.

When you find that special someone
Your world changes around 
You give him wholeheartedly 
As you believe a soul mate you have found

But in the end what I got 
Was the complete opposite of what I gave.
I was left out in the cold alone, 
A dreadful storm I had to brave. 

What I got...
Insincerity and distrust, 
Betrayal and deceit
Bitterness, empty promises, 
And a heartless scheming cheat

What I got.. 
A shattered heart, sleepless nights
and a river of endless tears.
Unsaid words which hurt the most,
And a soul left broken into pieces... 


CONTEST: WHAT I GAVE ..
SPONSOR: SHERI FRESONKE HARPER
DATE: 27-06-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nigros Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 3:23 AM
loving the write.......
Maharaj Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 3:40 AM
Thank You Patrick :)
Gibson Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Great expression of a great disappointment. Congratulations.
Maharaj Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 1:29 AM
Thank You :)
Callus Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 9:43 AM
I really like this write of yours, Sasha! If you read my entry you'll notice the similarities. (mine is all imaginative). Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Maharaj Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Many Thanks Paul. :) Will definitely have a look
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 10:18 PM
OH MY, this is a downright shame what happened to you. If this is all true, I feel bad for what happened with that guy. You wrote it very convincingly and it's a very good entry for this contest.
Maharaj Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:01 AM
Ahh its wat happened to a friend recently anx part of it is me as well . Thank you for ur well wishes :)
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 6:05 AM
Very heartfelt and sad write. The last stanza tells it all, Sasha
Maharaj Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 7:02 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram :)
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