What I Gave

I see a soldier over the rise
It's there my enemy lay
Startled, much to my surprize
Down the hill, a soldier in gray

With a steady pace, through the fog
The morning's mist a wall
A single shot, a barking dog
A voice in the distance called

My body's falling, no concern
A spinning sky, a soaring bird
A heart now stopped by the burn
Before my last breath was heard

What I gave, you ask of me
My death before I knew love
I took and oath, I couldn't flee
I died because account of


contest... What I Gave
6/20/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/14/2014 1:34:00 PM
Great write, Frederic. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:47:00 AM
Exactly the way I feel Frederic ! Top winner to me ,, big congrats on win // Upma//
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Date: 6/21/2014 3:57:00 PM
Dear Frederic, it's a shame that so many young people who never "knew love" are sent to battle. I admire their courage and appreciate their efforts to preserve freedom. Still, wouldn't it be ironic if those who declare war were forced to engage in the combat. Just a thought. Your poem drew me in immediately and it's Aces for the contest! Love, Carolyn (My contest is posted now. Sorry for the confusion. Admin has been working on my problem.)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/21/2014 4:28:00 PM
your thought is the same from all of us who served, and yes I saw that your contest was posted, thank you for your kindness
Date: 6/21/2014 3:39:00 PM
stirrimg me to the core, frederick... superb expressions!. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/21/2014 4:29:00 PM
thank you nette for reading and for your kindness
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