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What I Gave

What is with this bad behavior I am tryna be your savior Pulling you out of this rut Do I have to kick your butt Out of this gangs initiation Each days a continuation Of my efforts to make you see This false sense of reality They've been marking on your brain It's becoming such a strain To get your head out of the clouds Maybe if I got more loud And angry you might just hear Love in my voice to show I care Your innocence is being taken By gang members who are fakin' The real reasons they want you Isn't cause their friendships true They just need a patsy that Will take the fall when things go "splat" MY best ideas are not working They just still continue jerking You around just like a slave It doesn't matter what I gave To keep you out and not sucked down By so called friends who come around There's nothing left I can do It's totally up to you For noticing that I will be A real friend--why can't you see That what I give is so much more Than these clowns outside the door 6/20/2014

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Date: 7/14/2014 1:20:00 PM
Great write, Robin...I could almost hear you rappin.... Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2014 1:10:00 AM
Tremendous write Robin! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 7/13/2014 9:25:00 PM
Robin, I like the rap-like cadence of this very poignant slam-in poem. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/13/2014 7:08:00 PM
Robin, excellent use of voice in this terrific poem. If a friend doesn't tell you, who will? Congratulations on your win. I appreciated all the wonderful entries to this contests, thanks much for entering.
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:16:00 PM
Very nice poem, Robin. Sometimes no matter what we give experience may be the teacher while we continue to give. Very heartfelt poem.... Robert.
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Date: 6/20/2014 6:55:00 AM
well done! friendship is the best gift to give someone, and I hope it is accepted. getting involved with gangs are not the best idea. write on Robin, :)
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Date: 6/19/2014 11:39:00 PM
wow, you got that phrase fit into your poem really well, Robin. you are always right up with these contests. Way to get a poem up with that theme!!
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