Amit Valmiki Poet Light Verse

What I Feels

I just wonder,
What the magic you have.
Just next to my heart,
You beat the love rhythm.

I don’t know how to live?
Till the time I gains you.
Even the tears that flows down the eyes,
Bears pain of you.

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Gary Fields October 23, 2011 at 9:04 PM wyah! wyah! I love a slow love song when it is not about me..cheer up....thoughtful piece of write-^up! Look's like you have got the corner on misery covered.....your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS HA.HA.HE.HE.!

Red Fiery October 2, 2011 at 9:18 AM I forgot to rate this sweet poem..

Red Fiery October 2, 2011 at 9:17 AM This is emotionally romantic ! I liked this...I hope u get what u desire Amit Valmiki October 3, 2011 at 7:07 AM well, thnx for your luck for getting my desire. really feels appreciated by your lovely comment smriti ji. takecare and do visiting by my page.