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What I Believe

I pulled the clouds apart like a curtain..
There sat those who have gone too soon..
To know they are together, I am now certain..
And our hands touch lightly like floating balloons..

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Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/29/2012 8:35:00 PM

Reminds me of "a great cloud of witnesses"...Lovely thoughts...Love Diana

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2012 7:20:00 AM

I love the unique imagery of this one. Big congrats in this heavenly contest!

Date: 3/28/2012 4:21:00 PM

Michael, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest a beautiful write. Love Alexa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2012 5:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Michael. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/27/2012 3:39:00 AM

This one is my most favorite...it makes me feel all relaxed and assured!....You are a big kid, Michael...I believe this is exactly how God would have it be!,,,:) Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 7:31:00 PM

congrats Micxhael luv on a dynamic win for this lovely write infiltrated with immense imagery .. as only u can pen a beauty .. JG in hypnotic mode luv.. xoxo..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2012 5:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats...Sara

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/26/2012 4:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with a touching portrait.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/26/2012 3:35:00 PM

a sweet thought! Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/26/2012 2:43:00 PM

A beautiful picture. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/26/2012 1:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2012 12:28:00 PM

Michael, I really like the way you set the scene by pulling open the curtain. I feel certain we will be reunited with our loved ones in the afterlife. Congratulations on your second-place win. Love, Carolyn

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/25/2012 4:59:00 AM

And our hands touch lightly like floating balloons.. Such a lovely line Michael xxx luv n hugs

Cory Long

Date: 3/24/2012 4:56:00 PM

nicely penned Michael.. Cory

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2012 1:48:00 PM

beautiful personification of celestial joy, michael... a fav for me... wow, so breeezy and divine!... winning huggs!:)

Date: 3/24/2012 12:21:00 PM

A touching write Michael with beautiful imagery, I wish you all the best in Carolyn's contest. Love Alexa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2012 9:45:00 AM

will do Mike. she is very excited about tomorrow. Ron.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2012 9:20:00 AM

thank you Mike. Ron herwe. she is reading tonite and has loved your lines bro. will give her hugs and best wishes too. is 2 pm NY time ok Sunday? Ron.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/24/2012 9:17:00 AM

What a beautiful thought to believe in, Michael-- I would like to think of the same! I really liked your 1st and last lines here-- very palpable for me.... Beautiful! And hugs right back to you! :)

Katherine Stella

Date: 3/24/2012 8:52:00 AM

looks like a winner to me mike great imagery dear one thanks for sharing I too did one for this mine is called free bird but not sure if mine is right lol gl in contest my friend