What I Am and Who Am I

My lavish world of happiness
With digging of hole to fall down myself 
To flow into the drainage  
Far afar to go and go and go 
Damaged all and ruined 
But know why? No idea 
Perhaps missing and losing heart 
Big breakage and gaping 
Heart-loss moment and loss of trust 
My heart was clean so far  
I was thinking with boldness 
The time was driven to me to the way of endanger.  

It was the battle of life  
The bad days of life  
Truthfulness of life 
Years gathered thoughts and knowledge dampening 
And harshness of valueless spilling fate  
Concurrent offerings brought better experiences 
Useless practices and securing hate occurred  
Growing in the mind mostly  
Painful moments padlocked.  

I got diagnosed with growing sorrows 
God! You are omniscient and almighty 
I know you have created to me and landed 
Overlapping with this stressful life bringing monotonous moment 
I am dying in this survival  
Plenty of thoughts dying  
Bizarre of my life dying along with 
My fun dying, my pleasure dying 
My activeness and aggressiveness all dying 
O God! Then say to me who I am? 
I am your creativity or throwing trash of this Earth?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 3, 2014 at 9:11 PM
WOW, now that is a compliment I was not expecting... Thank you
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September 4, 2014 at 3:38 AM
Great, no problem, my all poems are for you compliments because you are all in one my inspiring poet. You write so sweet and lovely poems. Wish your more better...better...better progress. Thanks and warm regards. Kamal
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September 3, 2014 at 10:59 AM
I try to be kind...Linda
Dahal Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Linda, I always see you as my inspiration. You have written very very nice poems. Best regards. Kamal
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Hi Kamal, no problem. LINDA
Dahal Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Thank you Linda for your kindness. Kamal
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August 15, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Kamal, thank you for the reply... Sorry, about the double comment, I was not sure if it went through the first time...Linda
Dahal Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Never mind Linda. No problem. Sometimes happens like this. Take care and bye. Kamal
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August 14, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Kamal, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
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August 14, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Kamal, :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
Dahal Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Thank you very much Linda giving me congratulations and wish you also the best. Regards. Kamal
Philibert Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Like the poem, the title needs a question mark though !
Dahal Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Thank you for your advisable review, surely I will put a question mark. Regards. Kamal
Lewis Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Choice of words and structure well worked to effectively express the sense of struggle throughout.
Dahal Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Dear Michael, Thank you very much for your appreciation and deep expression over my poem. Kamal
Guzzi Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, please don't hesitate to ask if you need help. Light & Love
Dahal Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 10:47 PM
Dear Ms. Debbie Guzzi, Thanks a lot to you for welcoming to me in poetry suop. I appreciate and think that you are a person of great heart. Without help or joining hands nobody could get success in this world. Therefore, I am really hunger for your help and waiting but how and which way. I am interested to be a published writer actually. I never say I am perfect and know everything. I am still in learning point. And feeling so nice after reading your words. Once again I say thank you to you. Bye and take care. Kamal Dahal
Shines Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 7:06 AM
beautiful write.life is all about joy and sorrow.all the pain is part of learning.
Dahal Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 1:08 AM
Thanks a lot Ms. Kenisha Shines. I am really happy after reading your comment. Wish you all the best. Thank you.
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