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What Hovers in the Air Tonight

Tonight, no visions dance before thine eyes Tonight, dark clouds obscure the starlit sky Tonight, the gentle breeze hath packed it in Tonight, a wall of heat assaults the skin Tonight, no lovers linger by the lake Tonight, no children laugh or roller skate Tonight, a strange feeling hovers in the air Tonight, even non-believers say a prayer

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Date: 8/4/2025 3:31:00 PM
your poem sounds ominous and foreboding. Your words were definitely engaging. A masterpiece, enjoy your evening, Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2025 3:43:00 PM
I don't know about 'masterpiece,' but I'll take it... Thank you... I reread this and think about the night before the Ides of March in 'Julius Caesar.'
Date: 8/4/2025 12:03:00 PM
Yes a lot of people are questioning now Gershon..Yet in truth there are many signs The Lord supplies.' There is the dispute over The body of Moses.' Do you have a take on that? Although its no doubt of many aspects.' Yet also Simple with the Lords instruction.' He wants us to question otherwise there would be no record I beleive my job is to share.' I was remiss in my Quoting advice in sm however' i did not mention the staff and shoes or sandals.?
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