What Hovers in the Air Tonight

     Tonight, no visions dance before thine eyes
        Tonight, dark clouds obscure the starlit sky

     Tonight, the gentle breeze hath packed it in
        Tonight, a wall of heat assaults the skin

     Tonight, no lovers linger by the lake
        Tonight, no children laugh or roller skate

     Tonight, a strange feeling hovers in the air
        Tonight, even non-believers say a prayer
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Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:03 PM
For it's this kind of night, gives a sinner a scare! A dreary night for one that's lost, The time has come to pay the cost. I like it, Gershon. have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:31 PM
your poem sounds ominous and foreboding. Your words were definitely engaging. A masterpiece, enjoy your evening, Sara
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:43 PM
I don't know about 'masterpiece,' but I'll take it... Thank you... I reread this and think about the night before the Ides of March in 'Julius Caesar.'
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August 4, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Yes a lot of people are questioning now Gershon..Yet in truth there are many signs The Lord supplies.' There is the dispute over The body of Moses.' Do you have a take on that? Although its no doubt of many aspects.' Yet also Simple with the Lords instruction.' He wants us to question otherwise there would be no record I beleive my job is to share.' I was remiss in my Quoting advice in sm however' i did not mention the staff and shoes or sandals.?
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