What Hemingway Saw and Felt That Summer

What Hemingway Saw And Felt That Summer

floor, rat eaten shoe
fisherman and lake in tune
dawn, eggs and bacon

Robert J. Lindley, 4-04-2018
Haiku, ( Life, Living and Time)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/10/2018 8:59:00 AM
I see contrasting images of life here, Robert. The first line is acknowledging its harsh reality; the next line reflects peaceful serenity; the third declares 'live for the moment' and 'make the best of it'! Regards, my friend. // paul
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Date: 4/10/2018 9:54:00 AM
Spot on analysis my very insightful friend . To me that reflects much wisdom about life on your part. Recently I have written about two dozen Haiku's and have begun to like the poetry form more with each one I have written.
Date: 4/4/2018 8:18:00 PM
I can really see this. Great imagery in so few words.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/5/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I was in a early morn thought about life, Nature and Fate. Hemingway, one of my favorite authors, came to mind and out came this poem.
Date: 4/4/2018 5:29:00 PM
Whoa! I would not have wanted to share that sight of a rat eaten shoe. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Rat eaten shoes are just another part of the never ending destruction of things. Fate and Time decides what lasts and for how long..
Date: 4/4/2018 12:47:00 PM
descriptive ku reflective of hemingway's ' the old man and the sea'... applause, robert and huggs!
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I see you caught connection and the winds of Fate that bloweth upon all.
Date: 4/4/2018 11:09:00 AM
Interesting thoughts via your haiku...
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:02:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Hemingway was one of my top ten favorite authors in my early 20's.
Date: 4/4/2018 8:23:00 AM
Lovely Haiku my friend! Creative genius :) xomo!
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Read Hemingway a few days ago and this morn that just struck me.
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