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What Have You Done

An ice cube chin and sturdy feet, Until you pierced my atmosphere. The arrow’s twang made my heart heat.
What have you done?
This hard knock girl now filled with fear. I’m miffed with Cupid’s charming-cheat. These buckled knees — when you said “c’mere.” Your armor buffed — a smooth athlete. Thrust your confident smile - oh dear! Diamonds sparkle on the street —
What have you done?
6/28/2019

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Date: 6/30/2019 5:59:00 PM
Nicely refrained roundel -- TWANG! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2019 6:01:00 PM
Thank you and especially for the inspiration! I think this is my first! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/30/2019 2:42:00 PM
I love this, Kim.. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2019 6:00:00 PM
Thanks so much! Hugs!
Date: 6/29/2019 9:58:00 AM
Mysterious, alluring, and charming write Kim, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2019 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! xx
Date: 6/28/2019 5:06:00 PM
Superb write, Kim..enjoyed the tease in your words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 5:50:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/28/2019 9:08:00 AM
Love the intrigue, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Line! I had fun writing this. Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/28/2019 8:31:00 AM
I enjoyed this one too. I like the feel of your last two pieces. They are sophisticated casual.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thanks so much! Sophisticated casual - I like that!

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