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What Have You Done

An ice cube chin and sturdy feet,
Until you pierced my atmosphere.
The arrow’s twang made my heart heat.
What have you done?
This hard knock girl now filled with fear.
I’m miffed with Cupid’s charming-cheat.

These buckled knees —    when you said “c’mere.”
Your armor buffed — a smooth athlete.
Thrust your confident smile - oh dear!
Diamonds sparkle on the street —
What have you done?

6/28/2019

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Gershon Wolf Date: 6/30/2019 5:59:00 PM Nicely refrained roundel -- TWANG! :) gw Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/30/2019 6:01:00 PM Thank you and especially for the inspiration! I think this is my first! Hugs...Kim

Panagiota Romios Date: 6/30/2019 2:42:00 PM I love this, Kim.. Panagiota Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/30/2019 6:00:00 PM Thanks so much! Hugs!

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 6/29/2019 9:58:00 AM Mysterious, alluring, and charming write Kim, Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/30/2019 6:00:00 PM Thank you, Jennifer! xx

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 5:06:00 PM Superb write, Kim..enjoyed the tease in your words. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/28/2019 5:50:00 PM Thank you so much! Hugs...Kim

Line Gauthier Date: 6/28/2019 9:08:00 AM Love the intrigue, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/28/2019 9:13:00 AM Thanks, Line! I had fun writing this. Hugs...Kim

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/28/2019 8:31:00 AM I enjoyed this one too. I like the feel of your last two pieces. They are sophisticated casual. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/28/2019 8:45:00 AM Thanks so much! Sophisticated casual - I like that!