Kim Rodrigues Poet Roundel

What Have You Done

An ice cube chin and sturdy feet,
Until you pierced my atmosphere.
The arrow’s twang made my heart heat.
What have you done?
This hard knock girl now filled with fear.
I’m miffed with Cupid’s charming-cheat.

These buckled knees —    when you said “c’mere.”
Your armor buffed — a smooth athlete.
Thrust your confident smile - oh dear!
Diamonds sparkle on the street —
What have you done?

6/28/2019

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Gershon Wolf June 30, 2019 at 5:59 PM Nicely refrained roundel -- TWANG! :) gw Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2019 at 6:01 PM Thank you and especially for the inspiration! I think this is my first! Hugs...Kim

Panagiota Romios June 30, 2019 at 2:42 PM I love this, Kim.. Panagiota Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2019 at 6:00 PM Thanks so much! Hugs!

Jennifer Proxenos June 29, 2019 at 9:58 AM Mysterious, alluring, and charming write Kim, Hugs, Jennifer. Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2019 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Jennifer! xx

Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 5:06 PM Superb write, Kim..enjoyed the tease in your words. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 5:50 PM Thank you so much! Hugs...Kim

Line Gauthier June 28, 2019 at 9:08 AM Love the intrigue, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 9:13 AM Thanks, Line! I had fun writing this. Hugs...Kim

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2019 at 8:31 AM I enjoyed this one too. I like the feel of your last two pieces. They are sophisticated casual. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 8:45 AM Thanks so much! Sophisticated casual - I like that!