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What Has She Done

A heart filled with nothing A mind that thinks not much A soul that runs on empty A body that craves no touch Is just an empty walking shell With an attitude that cares less Is just a person with no will left and a life she's made a mess It's just a poem people!;) lol!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/2/2019 4:37:00 PM

I just love your comment there under the poem! You read my mind, Brenda. Still chuckling. ~ Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 8:11:00 PM

I finally got to bring. Aside to your face huh!?;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 8:10:00 PM

Lol well ya know I appreciate people concerts but sometimes a poem is just poem! Thanks so UCB Grershon!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/2/2019 4:23:00 PM

ouch...you pen pain as well as beauty...wow... related to the other poem about the friend? i went through an array of emotions when i dropped my friend...

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 8:09:00 PM

Thanks Sandy much appreciated !;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/2/2019 3:56:00 PM

Scare us why don't you? Sad and lonely and desperate feeling Brenda. Happy to see your note at the bottom.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 4:04:00 PM

Well I know everyone means well when they speak as if it's me but sometimes I don't them to think that! Like this! Not me per say my world but I am much stronger than that! Thanks;)