Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

What Has She Done

A heart filled with nothing
A mind that thinks not much
A soul that runs on empty
A body that craves no touch


Is just an empty walking shell
With an attitude that cares less
Is just a person with no will left
and a life she's made a mess




It's just a poem people!;) lol!

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Gershon Wolf October 2, 2019 at 4:37 PM I just love your comment there under the poem! You read my mind, Brenda. Still chuckling. ~ Gershon Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 8:11 PM I finally got to bring. Aside to your face huh!?;) Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 8:10 PM Lol well ya know I appreciate people concerts but sometimes a poem is just poem! Thanks so UCB Grershon!;)

Sandra Adams October 2, 2019 at 4:23 PM ouch...you pen pain as well as beauty...wow... related to the other poem about the friend? i went through an array of emotions when i dropped my friend... Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 8:09 PM Thanks Sandy much appreciated !;)

Chris Green October 2, 2019 at 3:56 PM Scare us why don't you? Sad and lonely and desperate feeling Brenda. Happy to see your note at the bottom. Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 4:04 PM Well I know everyone means well when they speak as if it's me but sometimes I don't them to think that! Like this! Not me per say my world but I am much stronger than that! Thanks;)