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WHAT HAPPENED Darkness is enveloping sinister and frightening, Elusive, alluring, captivating and Inviting, Every night it falls like a clock that is punctual, And we accept it as a part of Our life that is factual, Whilst the earth revolves around a burning sun, Giving us light, Our moon revolves around Planet earth, That’s how it all began. In the beginning was God – The beginning of time, Is when light and darkness Starts to make sense in this rhyme. And eventually the beginning of time, Sought for man, and so we Began our inevitable climb! Thanks to Greek Mythology, And the gods, Prometheus, it is said Stole fire from the heavens, giving it To humankind, Which brought about the start Of civilization, for now Man could find, And make warmth, hot food, Primitive weapons, comfort and light, Warding off dangerous predators Of incredible might. But Man also inherited evil And so it was born, From the serpent and Eve, No longer was man as God Made him, naïve. The time of darkness and light, And evil and good, Is now understood, Both were rife In life! The Crusaders who fought and killed In the name of Christianity and God Were a so called valiant lot, But truly an evil killing squad! After many eons we evolved and And arrived at the last century, when Two world wars were fought! Millions of Jews were killed In the 2nd World War’s plight, Under Hitler, an evil leader who only Saw his light, In battle after battle and fight after fight! Today we still fight the battle Between darkness and light It's name is narcotics, which allure Youngsters into the darkness of life, For which they will slice one With a knife! What are we heading for, for what Is our strife? Humankind should fervently Pray for peace, A life that is far from evil and dark, Remember what happened for only Noah, his family and few animals And his Ark! This could certainly happen again! If atom bombs severe our planet in parts, Human hearts, Have already been chosen from The North, South, East and West, To start a new era from the mild, kind, And faithful who have already Been put to the test!

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Date: 4/12/2020 6:09:00 PM
What happened indeed Way too much greed Enjoyed your choice of words.
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Date: 4/13/2020 2:56:00 AM
Absolutely Donna and this greed has caused the great divide between the rich and the poor. The poor have access to very little and are dying by the thousands during this Corona virus. Although it has no respect of late for color, nationality, poor or rich or religion - we must practice solidarity at a time like this, we need to understand that we must! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 11/15/2019 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for this very succinct history lesson. Sadly though we, the human race will never learn, even so we have to try. Blessings from Cyprus..D.
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Date: 4/13/2020 2:36:00 AM
Thank you for a lovely comment - I'm totally guilty of not going into my inbox, normally just look at comments on my last few poems I have posted. My Parents lived in Cyprus for 5 years as my father was an army man. My father was English and my mother Greek and I am married to a Cypriot - in fact we went out in our early twenties and lost touch until the year 2000 , we got married 6 months later in December 2010. I will be visiting your poems today. Blessings, Jennifer
Date: 11/14/2019 4:03:00 PM
a warm poem in a cold world where love and respect seem more further away like a distant distant galaxy. I've lost men, women, and children family in the Treblinka camp in ww2, just for a their religious designation and even some, extended family , are cold and distant as maybe are most people. great words. feel free to see or comment on mine. be well as you can from Daniel schack on the soup.
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Date: 4/13/2020 2:26:00 AM
Hi Daniel, I am so sorry for the unhappiness and pain brought upon you, but you are God's child and you are under his tender care. Thank you for your November 2019 comment but I have only recently been going into my inbox, just used to see what came in for my latest poems. I will certainly look at your poems today, Blessings, Jennifer
Date: 6/13/2019 3:48:00 PM
An amazing piece filling with so much of history Jennifer Excellently penned indeed. Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 6/21/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thank -you Gordon, I only noticed this comment now - indeed a compliment. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/26/2019 11:02:00 AM
You are truly a "thinker" and have created a poem to remember, a poem to congeal the times. Thank you.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/26/2019 12:52:00 PM
Thank-you Sunlite Wanter for a truly poignant comment. This was a revamped poem that I wrote some time ago - really love your comment! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/21/2019 7:10:00 PM
My dear friend, I love the depth, beauty and creativity of your poetic talent presenting this superbly crafted gem on mythology. As fallen creatures humanity faces this world and is darkness-what path we each take determines far more than the brief span we will exist here on earth.. A fav...
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Date: 1/21/2019 11:53:00 PM
Thank-you for a lovely comment dear Robert - yes our lives on earth are but a small spec of sand on a beach, we owe it to ourselves and our children, to leave some legacy behind before we are called by our Maker. You certainly have. Poetry hugs. Jennifer.
Date: 12/31/2018 3:28:00 AM
Humanity happened! Very powerful poem Jennifer. You hit the nail on the head. Kim
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Date: 1/1/2019 1:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim, The world must just now work together, or heaven help us! Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/29/2018 8:03:00 AM
Powerful words Jennifer, there have been many crusades by different people and many atrocities that are never in the news or given much notice... Brilliant poem..
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Date: 12/29/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for a brilliant comment Silent One! Evil goes back to the beginning - it was born then, how will it die unless we severe the serpent's head! A wonderful 2019 to you and your family - Jennifer.
Date: 12/29/2018 7:06:00 AM
Well done Jennifer...You expressed yourself ...and you're right...the present darkness is really inward despite the outward light...All the best for the New year
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Date: 12/29/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thank-you Arturo, Yes it is a huge concern but as long as we have light within us, we have God on our side. Poetry hugs to you and your family for 2019 - a blessed year ahead. Jennifer ,
Date: 12/29/2018 4:51:00 AM
There are no errors dearest Jennifer! But only Beauty prevailing! Though we can see the dark.. feel the pain and horror of wars.. moan under the wrongdoing of evil hearts.. Your inner beauty while setting your very wealthy and sensitive words is outshining! An awesome work of art and heart giving a honourable credit to Humanity that is still suffering! Into my very heart for its genuineness and into my fave list for its uniqueness! Keep shining Soul sister.. love and hugs dearest Jennifer.
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Date: 12/29/2018 7:44:00 AM
There you go again Besma, my 2nd Shakespearean poet! What wonderful words your quill spills! Thank you for an honorable comment which i have accepted with heartfelt gratitude. May 2019 be your greatest year thus far - be blessed always dear soul sister, Jennifer
Date: 12/29/2018 3:12:00 AM
So sad that we find greed corruption, murder, rapes , and all sorts of heinious crimes becoming the norm. We live in hope. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and I hope 2019 brings you good health and happiness. Tom.
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Date: 12/29/2018 7:52:00 AM
Hi Tom, Have you been away, missed your cheery smile! We must hope until somehow, (this should happen shortly) we find worldwide empathy! Poetry hugs and wishes for 2019, Jennifer.
Date: 12/28/2018 6:57:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … humanity has been at war with itself forever. It has been devastated by, disease, natural disasters and yet the population is close to plague proportions. However, the modern enemy of drugs is going to be a battle that will become worse before better - its a worry for everyone - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 12/29/2018 12:48:00 AM
Gangsters, drug syndicates, rapists, murderers, white collar crime (which includes politicians), and many more can no longer be housed in prisons as prisons are overflowing, so dangerous prisoners are sometimes released in order to have the space. We were held up at gunpoint in or own drive way with high palisade fencing, electric fencing and CCTV Cameras. Fortunately our children are adults now and not teenagers. thank you for a lovely comment Lindsay, Poetry hugs and best wishes for the coming year Jennifer
Date: 12/28/2018 5:13:00 PM
Frustrating when you can’t get back in to exit! Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/29/2018 12:50:00 AM
So true Kim! Thanks for stopping by. All the best and poetry hugs for the coming year, Jennifer
Date: 12/28/2018 2:56:00 PM
The world was created and peace was found, but then- chaos was abound. So sad indeed, and it is still happening now. I am praying with so many, that things change. For the better. You have expressed this so well. ~ Brandy
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/28/2018 3:15:00 PM
I hope so Brandy, the world is in somewhat of a chaotic state at present - united empathy is needed. Thank you for a great comment. Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/28/2018 2:21:00 PM
Someone had to say it and you've penned it very well. I sometimes wonder if humankind had evolved at all; we seem to be coming full circle now; right back into the Dark Ages.
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Date: 12/28/2018 2:48:00 PM
Never a truer word spoken M.L.K. Living and life is like treading a continual fine line , especially when teenagers are involved. Love and beset wishes, Jennifer.
Date: 12/28/2018 2:00:00 PM
Wow, this is an intellectual piece in the sense that it contains so many learned facts woven with your point of view. I really was engrossed in this write that you surely had to devote a chunk of time to write. Good job, many kudos. I hope your Xmas was memory making, mine was great. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (oh, still no mail)
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Date: 12/28/2018 2:10:00 PM
Hi CayCay, Thank you for a wonderful comment - I meant to soup mail you - glad you had a wonderful Christmas, our son and his wife made ours memory making. My dear friend, I hope that 2019 will be a year full of memories you have never dreamed of - you are such a gentle soul, and it shows in the words you choose and write. Your poetic skills are phenomenal! Love and loads of poetry hugs,, Jennifer.
Date: 12/28/2018 1:30:00 PM
There will always be battles with dark and light but light will always prevail. You put a lot of thought into this poem Jennifer. Well done! I too believe prayer is our most valuable tool to win over darkness. Happy New Year dear friend! : )xxoo
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/28/2018 1:49:00 PM
Thank-you Connie, as Mark said above, it is a constant battle but as you say, light always come out on top! Thank you for your lovely comment and may the coming year, bring health and happiness to you and all your family. Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 12/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
Your poem makes me realize that God is still in control of everything. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 12/28/2018 9:59:00 AM
Absolutely Beata, thank you for a very relevant comment. I'm enjoying your poems enormously! Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer.

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