What Goes Up, Must Come Down Contest

What Goes Up, Must Come Down Sponsor: Catie Lindsey ~Different beliefs can be a blessing~ He was born on a chilly Saturday afternoon, sweet boy with lots of love, we all knew he'd be very special because he had come from up above. Tiny toes and a wrinkly face, such a sight for sore eyes to see, what a blessing it is that God chose Joseph Thomas to be a part of me. From a toddler to a teenager, soon in college after those days, Joey married Layla his childhood crush, in love in a special way. Soon I had grandchildren and how joyful my life became, we weathered so many storms, but our family overcame. On my last birthday I turned a tender young age of seventy, sad news followed and we learned that nothing is a guarantee. My Joey had been battling lymphoma at only forty years old, we all gathered around the priest, for nothing could be controlled. I stood there numb watching my son take his last short breath, it seemed not too long ago I held him on my breast. He grew great wings and flew above straight into the light, I knew I would see him again, what a sorrowful delight. My youngest daughter Caroline was pregnant with her first, a gentle baby boy who came out backwards and headfirst! I had the honor to hold little Tommy for the very first time, I saw those brown eyes and I knew he was special and sublime. Can it be true? Does my faith believe this to be our reality? Can a soul be reborn into another child, a blessing of geniality? My faith had been renewed and my perceptions had been overflowing, I know deep down inside, Tommy holds the spirit of my Joey. I believe the death of my sweet boy transmigrated into my grandson, an embodiment of his soul with in, two spiritual bodies becoming one. So amazing that Joey's spirit has again become earth bound, this is why I believe what goes up....must come back down... ~Date Written: February 28, 2016~

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Date: 3/9/2016 12:46:00 AM
Wonderful poetry here Laura.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 3/9/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma:)-luloo*smiles*
Date: 3/8/2016 9:56:00 AM
Sweet, gentle and very touching, Laura. A very nice interpretation of the theme.
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:23:00 PM
James, thank you very much :)-luloo
Date: 3/7/2016 7:41:00 PM
So beautiful, touched my heart... Congratulations on your win. A 7
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:23:00 PM
thank you very much Susan :)-luloo
Date: 3/7/2016 7:35:00 PM
Hi Laura, What a beautiful poem. Very sad but uplifting in the end--inspired interpretation of the concept of what goes up must come down, and very well written. Congrats on a well-deserved win. Best, Brian
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:22:00 PM
many thanks Brian :)-luloo
Date: 3/7/2016 6:53:00 PM
Very touching, Laura. Congratulations on your nice win in the 'what goes up, must come down' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/8/2016 9:22:00 PM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 3/7/2016 2:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem,Laura,congratulations on the “What Goes Up, Must Come Down” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Eve... :)-luloo
Date: 3/7/2016 12:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:54:00 PM
Than you very much lady :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 8:31:00 PM
A stunning piece Luloo, very emotional....I lost my brother when was 38 to melanoma and from time to time he has made his presence known.
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:34:00 PM
Oh Tim, I'm so sorry for your loss..but it is true, our loved ones do know how to show us they are still with us..Thank you..have a blessed night :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 7:55:00 PM
wow, what an amazing idea. you took this challenge and produced quite an interesting interpretation of it. this is a beautiful way to see it, Laura. It's all "in the family" too that we find our destiny.
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, you are sweet :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 5:03:00 PM
Laura, wow, what an emotional write, I had tears reading this, you really took this theme to an amazing place, a winner to me, I love it 7 ~
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:05:00 PM
Broken Wings, I apologize for some reason my commenting features are getting screwed up! Thank you very much, you just made my day a little brighter..:)-luloo Thank you
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Date: 2/28/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 4:56:00 PM
what an amazing take on the theme LuLoo good luck in the contest this is such a touching write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you sweet leady :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 4:42:00 PM
Beautiful. Peace be with you. Charlie
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Charlie..:)-luloo
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