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What Goes Up, Must Come Down

bouncing pouncing jumping up down    keen   		
somersaults  on  trampoline 				
enthusiasm giggles					
out doing  big brother’s  errs				
bouncing higher    higher   like  jumping beans		

what goes up must come down     what the hack  	
	flip, lull ….  plop  flop   flat on his back	
			 		 
turns head over heels in air  				
landing on her feet  with flair					
this is the way you do it  	  with knack	

3/6/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 12:38 PM
The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece
A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 12:24 AM
Eve, Congrats on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Wonderful poetry here Eve.. congrats on big win.
Hicks Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Such a cute take on the contest. Very flamboyant and full of life, and I enjoyed your use of spacing. Fitting for the trampoline. Before my nephews moved to Guatemala we used to play Dead Man, Dead Man, on the trampoline ... brings back memories.
Inman Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Unique take on sibling rivalry, Eve. It sounds almost like a memory. Nice write.
Showalter Swift Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Your writing has such a fun flair of its own!
Gentry Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I like how you did this.
Haight Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Love your take on the theme, Eve. Congratulations on your nice win in the 'what goes up, must come down' contest! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Wow Eve, how clever and creative! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *Smiles*
Aniagyei Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:43 AM
The picture does it all for me.....good write, Eve!
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
made me smile Eve - great entry for the contest:-) good luck, hugs Jan xx
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