What Goes Up, Must Come Down

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bouncing pouncing jumping up down    keen   		
somersaults  on  trampoline 				
enthusiasm giggles					
out doing  big brother’s  errs				
bouncing higher    higher   like  jumping beans		

what goes up must come down     what the hack  	
	flip, lull ….  plop  flop   flat on his back	
			 		 
turns head over heels in air  				
landing on her feet  with flair					
this is the way you do it  	  with knack	

3/6/2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/15/2016 12:38:00 PM

The accolade this piece deserves is a glory that stands in its own class. Great write friend and please continue to share your magnificent piece

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 12:24:00 AM

Eve, Congrats on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/9/2016 12:50:00 AM

Wonderful poetry here Eve.. congrats on big win.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/8/2016 11:08:00 PM

Such a cute take on the contest. Very flamboyant and full of life, and I enjoyed your use of spacing. Fitting for the trampoline. Before my nephews moved to Guatemala we used to play Dead Man, Dead Man, on the trampoline ... brings back memories.