What Goes Up Must Come Down

The grass is green and the sky is blue
The sun is hot and the rain wets you
As the sun rises the day is new
This we're told but is it true?
Ice is cold and fire is hot
Green is for go and red is for stop
Down is below and up is on top
We're told they're opposites but can they swap?
Lightening we can see and thunder we can hear
Distance is faraway and close is very near
Quickly looking is a glance but any longer is a stare
How do we know what to accept and what to fear?
How do we know what to choose?
Have we told all this just to confuse?
Do we have to believe or can we refuse?
I have a feeling they're just one persons' views
Time goes by when the clock is wound
It's not missing when it's been found
If you can turn a smile into a frown
Then what goes up must come down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/27/2016 2:13:00 PM
Love it - very clever. I hope you entered the contest - if so, good luck with this delightfully philosophic poem ... CayCay
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Date: 2/27/2016 11:53:00 AM
Real uplifting write Susan, enjoyed it much indeed, !
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