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What Goes Up Falls Apart

my heart climbed high, on a ledge for you, we held out our hands, this love was brand new, you built me up higher, i had no memory of the ground, when you held me close, i was floating on a cloud, then came the silence, the ignoring my distress, you took me to the stars, then you left me with the mess, of a heart shredded to pieces, and a soul broken in two, just because you got bored, i was no longer flying next to you, no now i am falling, and it scares me love, im watching you move forward, on your own up above, i know that we are done now, you made it clear as day, that what goes up falls down, and now im down to stay. 3/2/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/15/2016 12:23:00 AM
Jezabella, Congrats on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/9/2016 12:49:00 AM
Wonderful poetry here jezabella.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 3/8/2016 10:08:00 AM
Ahh, Jezabella, so sad, but a lovely nicely flowing poem.
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Date: 3/8/2016 7:19:00 AM
Congrats for your placement in the contest Jezabella!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I really like how you did this, well thought out.
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:35:00 PM
Jezabella, congratulations on the “What Goes Up, Must Come Down” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2016 12:51:00 PM
Jezabella, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *Smiles*
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