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What Goes Up Comes Down

rise,
             upward, cumulative
      ascending, climbing, levitating
  surge, crescendo, nosedive, slump
     plummeting, dropping, sinking
                plunge, descent
                          fall

                          full,
                    total, whole
      jam-packing, loading, extending
entirety, aggregate, cavity, nothingness
         draining, unloading, purging
                     void, abyss
                         empty



Date written: 06/16/2021

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Panagiota Romios Date: 6/17/2021 3:48:00 AM Awesome, Edward Fantastic vocabulary! Panagiota xx Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/17/2021 1:24:00 PM Thank you very much, Panagiota:-)

Heidi Sands Date: 6/16/2021 8:47:00 AM Wow, great writing! Well done :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/16/2021 11:43:00 AM Thank you very much indeed, Heidi:-) I'm glad you liked it, my friend.

Constance La France Date: 6/16/2021 7:31:00 AM Edward, wonderfully penned diamonte x2, I wrote a poem once with the same title but mine was about my cat that went up and up my curtains walking the curtain rod for a bit and then came crashing down, peace _Constance Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/16/2021 11:40:00 AM Thank you, Constance:-) Snuggles is always up to mischief, huh? I'd love to read that poem!

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/16/2021 7:12:00 AM I feel how the words describing rise levitate and words that speak of fall plunge. Full feels total, whole--empty drains. Brilliantly done --two picture frames in words! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 6/16/2021 11:42:00 AM Thank you as always, Vijay:-) It's always great to get your feedback, my friend.