Edward Ibeh Poet Diamante

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What Goes Up Comes Down

rise,
             upward, cumulative
      ascending, climbing, levitating
  surge, crescendo, nosedive, slump
     plummeting, dropping, sinking
                plunge, descent
                          fall

                          full,
                    total, whole
      jam-packing, loading, extending
entirety, aggregate, cavity, nothingness
         draining, unloading, purging
                     void, abyss
                         empty



Date written: 06/16/2021

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Panagiota Romios June 17, 2021 at 3:48 AM Awesome, Edward Fantastic vocabulary! Panagiota xx Edward Ibeh June 17, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you very much, Panagiota:-)

Heidi Sands June 16, 2021 at 8:47 AM Wow, great writing! Well done :) Edward Ibeh June 16, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thank you very much indeed, Heidi:-) I'm glad you liked it, my friend.

Constance La France June 16, 2021 at 7:31 AM Edward, wonderfully penned diamonte x2, I wrote a poem once with the same title but mine was about my cat that went up and up my curtains walking the curtain rod for a bit and then came crashing down, peace _Constance Edward Ibeh June 16, 2021 at 11:40 AM Thank you, Constance:-) Snuggles is always up to mischief, huh? I'd love to read that poem!

Vijay Pandit June 16, 2021 at 7:12 AM I feel how the words describing rise levitate and words that speak of fall plunge. Full feels total, whole--empty drains. Brilliantly done --two picture frames in words! Edward Ibeh June 16, 2021 at 11:42 AM Thank you as always, Vijay:-) It's always great to get your feedback, my friend.