What Goes Up Comes Down

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rise, upward, cumulative ascending, climbing, levitating surge, crescendo, nosedive, slump plummeting, dropping, sinking plunge, descent fall full, total, whole jam-packing, loading, extending entirety, aggregate, cavity, nothingness draining, unloading, purging void, abyss empty Date written: 06/16/2021

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/17/2021 3:48:00 AM

Awesome, Edward Fantastic vocabulary! Panagiota xx

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thank you very much, Panagiota:-)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/16/2021 8:47:00 AM

Wow, great writing! Well done :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Heidi:-) I'm glad you liked it, my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2021 7:31:00 AM

Edward, wonderfully penned diamonte x2, I wrote a poem once with the same title but mine was about my cat that went up and up my curtains walking the curtain rod for a bit and then came crashing down, peace _Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2021 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Constance:-) Snuggles is always up to mischief, huh? I'd love to read that poem!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/16/2021 7:12:00 AM

I feel how the words describing rise levitate and words that speak of fall plunge. Full feels total, whole--empty drains. Brilliantly done --two picture frames in words!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/16/2021 11:42:00 AM

Thank you as always, Vijay:-) It's always great to get your feedback, my friend.