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What Goes Around

what goes around comes around so they say atomic particles head to the shores some afraid of an uncertain outcome will plankton, fish, and kelp be destroyed the chain of food for man interrupted will the ocean’s food be radioactive will it be deformed, grotesque, dangerous humans who eat the nuclear exposed slowly develop disease or mutations at least one hundred years for the clearance sixty-six years after the atomic bomb was dropped on Hiroshima, an accident spilling nuclear waste sends outcries to stop what goes around comes around so they say Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Contest: Global Poetry Topic: The Nuclear Leak/The Impact On Land And Sea

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Date: 12/9/2014 1:00:00 AM
Powerful and good write Sara.. best wishes Milly.
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:44:00 PM
Hi Sara, coming back to congratulate you on a great win! A powerful, thought provoking write...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:57:00 AM
This is a lovely piece and its a blessing to read it. Nice work.. Have a lovely week ahead
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Date: 12/2/2014 12:48:00 AM
Really wonderful and inspiring Sara! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/1/2014 7:43:00 PM
Really concise Sarah! a polished verse with an important message. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:54:00 PM
you sent a thought provoking message to us all Sara - great write and many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2014 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on your win much deserved
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Date: 11/30/2014 8:01:00 AM
Keep up the good poetry
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:01:00 PM
I hope we never see that again, but, if we got em, someone eventually will deploy. God save us. Blank verse is not an easy thing to achieve. You took on a tough subject and a lot of multi syllable words to bring this around. Good work. Thomas
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:08:00 AM
hnmmm, Ok, I will stay tuned.....
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:13:00 PM
looking forward to the final piece.. great intro, sara.. huggs
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:28:00 PM
I'm looking forward to your finished version Sara, my imagination take is already speculating a brilliant conclusion, Blessings, Carl
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:20:00 PM
love this poem so far, my friend - way to go!
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Date: 11/25/2014 10:55:00 AM
I have been reading the words from Chief Settle -- these few words remind me of him. We are a thread that is part of the greater woven world.
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