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What Gives Me Pleasure

Water trickling downward on the sand and the sea will create ripples and bubbles to touch

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Date: 12/11/2020 1:31:00 PM
I find that the simpler things are, the most pleasure they give...and so do these ripples and bubbles! Short & sweet:) Regards /// paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/11/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 10/13/2020 3:27:00 PM
I am enjoying your poem, feeling the bubbles.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/14/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Bubbles are always fun :)
Date: 10/12/2020 8:46:00 AM
Lovely imagery
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/12/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/12/2020 6:49:00 AM
The sound of a cascade that leads to the sea. Perfect harmony. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/12/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Victor :)
Date: 10/11/2020 2:28:00 PM
How lovely a write, Angela!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. I always appreciate your visit to my page :)
Date: 10/11/2020 1:57:00 PM
A beautiful snapshot of a simple picture of the sea. Through it I can feel the waves and smell the aroma of the surf.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, Sam. I haven't written but a couple of Cinquain's, so I thought I would give it another try :)
Date: 10/11/2020 1:13:00 PM
The simple things in life can give us pleasure Angela, no better place than the beach. Tom
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. I miss the beach :)
Date: 10/11/2020 12:19:00 PM
The sand and sea of the beach make me happy, too - very descriptive write, Angie-
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle. Maybe I will eventually get to go there again :)
Date: 10/11/2020 11:12:00 AM
- Beautiful, happy bubbles Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/11/2020 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs back :)

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