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What Fresh Breath

what fresh breath has been offerd skies line mountians silver lining our nights what left to cling only my breath rest beyond tombstone plea what giant has been slayed shake for me in a ball room watch as clowns smear what have we grown this this this me and that fresh breath ? an other time less worn walk gentle hands we hold you one tear dropping at a time these sleves have shrugged pain as this heart has bled depths of what for who how mant tear stained streets have you splshed in the joy of each drop which why me caught me that you would open my eyes to see it has been you all along not for you but for me i love you ?

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Date: 9/1/2017 5:24:00 PM
Love the effect you made with the centering of this FRESH poem, timothy. And the imagery was so lovely. Thanks for your recent comments. I wish I could have done "American Pie" more justice since it is such an iconic song.
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Date: 9/1/2017 10:26:00 PM
yeah ... hard to followthe word iconic ... hey really appreciate you checking thies piece out ...

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