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What Fascinates Me- On Seeing a Tiny Door

Who would answer if I knocked?
A little gnome in stripey socks.
Would he call out, “ Who dares to knock.”?
Or sic on me his pet blue fox.

Would it be a lonely hobbit
wearing cobbled boots he wears by habit
and a cobwebbed hat of furry rabbit
Sipping mead from a wobbly goblet?

It doesn’t look like a fairy would
for it isn’t decked how a fairy twould 
with childhood dreams and elfinwood
Convinced I am of the likelihood. 

Who ever lives in this tiny abode 
Their door to the world has long been closed. 
Where a peaceful meadow once outflowed, 
Paved up to the door by a busy road.
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Gasun Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:51 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend! Such a beautiful imaginative write on "What Fascinates Me". I'm so delighted to read it. Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/cute write and picture. Did you knock on the door??? Have a blessed day writing away...................
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 4:45 PM
HI Paula: Thanks for Your lovely comment. I must admit I didn’t go so far as to knock…..sometimes it is best to keep the mystery. Best, SuZ
Agustin Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 12:11 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing what fascinates you through this fascinating muse of yours. God bless you.
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Dear Beata. Thanks so much. I am happy you enjoyed my little ditty. Bless you too. SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 6:47 PM
I loved the whimsical nature of this pleasing poem SuZ. Pure fascination! Congratulations on your HM in Jeff’s premiere contest. This was so delightful! Blessings xxoo
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Thankyou so much, Connie : It was a fun little piece to write. Thanks always for your friendship and encouragement. Aloha, SuZ
Kyser Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Suzanne - I wanted to know what was behind that door as well! A wonderful poem to stir the imagination of a child or an adult! Thanks for contributing this piece to the contest!
Alex Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 9:57 PM
A bit suspense-tinged. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:02 AM
So nice to hear from you Christuraj , I appreciate your welcome comments. SuZ
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:01 AM
Hi Jeff: Thankyou so much for my HM. I know there is much more in real life that fascinates me but sometimes it is good to let the imagination go. Have a great day. SuZ
Delaney Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Thanks Christuraj. I appreciate your encouraging words. Best, SuZ
Cunningham Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 12:34 PM
An enjoyable mystical tale Suz, children especially would love it. Tom
Delaney Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 3:33 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Tom: my Muse is finicky with what I write about. LOL SuZ
Leffanta Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 11:54 AM
Enjoyed your poem and your friend's photo! Aloha!
Delaney Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Thanks for your Aloha and for commenting, Rick. Best, SuZ
Hankins Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 8:28 AM
A really delightful poem, Suzanne, which I thoroughly enjoyed and could picture myself reading to a child. A child would understand this so much better than we adults!
Theraven Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Suzanne, Simply delightful poem all yours. One that adds to the charm of St. Thomas's Square. A magical quality 'Where a peaceful meadow once outflowed ~~ Paved up to the door by a busy road'. You've quite a keen and imaginative mind. -Richard
Delaney Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Hi Richard: A friend posted this pic on Tapatalk and I was immediately and thankfully inspired. I was beginning to think my imagination was gone. Thanks for cheering me with your thoughtful comment.
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Oh, your photo is unique, SuZ. No wonder you want to knock on that door. Progress sometimes neglects the meadows. You gave voice to that unknown within.
Delaney Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Thanks, Vijay: Thankful to be inspired to write at last. A friend posted this photo yesterday and it immediately awoke my imagination.
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