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What Fascinates Me

I'm intrigued by what there may be 'neath great depths of ocean and sea Treasures lost from life's history A mystery A mystery What's buried under ocean sands Pirate's plunder and wedding bands I dream of finding pearls in strands With my two hands With my two hands Ancient vessels, sunken for years found off the sea coast of Algiers admired by Mesdames and Messieurs Toasted with cheers Toasted with cheers I'd drain one mile of a river just one briny little sliver What will its waters deliver? Would I shiver? Would I shiver? What secrets do the oceans keep? Do monsters swim or do they creep? I long to execute a sweep In fathoms deep In fathoms deep Curiosity in me wakes To dive within uncharted lakes and sea beds risen from earthquakes How high the stakes How high the stakes But sunken relics from the past remain interred in oceans, vast Bounty from ships with broken mast My dream downcast My dream downcast June 1st, 2022 Fascination and Awe Contest Sponsored by Jeff Kyser Poetry Form - Monotetra

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2022 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful deep mysteries of the deep sea write. Have a blessed day.............

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/3/2022 9:22:00 AM

Thank you for thinking it worth of a win, Paula. Enjoy your weekend.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/3/2022 12:12:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing what fascinates you through this fascinating muse of yours. God bless you.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/3/2022 9:21:00 AM

Thank you very much, Beata.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/2/2022 6:55:00 PM

I love the mysteries of the sea and your poem expresses the wonders of the sea elegantly Jenna. This is one of your best and I am Faving it to read again. Great form, rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your HM in Jeff’s Premiere contest. Blessings xxoo

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/3/2022 9:21:00 AM

I've always wondered what I'd find if only a small portion could be exposed. You would have a lot to discover, giving where you live. Thank you, Connie, for thinking this poem is one of my best. It only made it to HM, but reading your assessment is better than a win.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 6/2/2022 1:59:00 PM

Jenna - I had to overcome a bit of my own fear of “the deep”, what happens when you watch Jaws at an impressionable young age, but you capture the curiousity and mystery and intrigue very well! Thanks for contributing to the contest!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2022 5:31:00 PM

That would do it. The ocean is their home, not mine. I appreciate having been awarded a placement in your contest. Thanks, Jeff.

Mark Koplin

Date: 6/1/2022 1:25:00 PM

Beautiful and an absolute joy to read! Well done Jenna!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2022 5:31:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Mark.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/1/2022 10:56:00 AM

What fascinates me Jenna, is the way you put this one together, esp. the third stanza, off the coast of Algiers where indeed you will find Messieurs, but overall the form and delivery is searching with a mythical quality throughout, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thanks so very much for letting me know which part of the poem you particularly enjoyed, David. It's insightful to me.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/1/2022 8:57:00 AM

Loved this fantasy write, Jenna, and the poetry form you used. I think I remember you using this form once before. Nicely done. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/1/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thank you very much for visiting, John. I always appreciate your thoughts.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2022 8:43:00 AM

Enjoyed your verse Jenna, lost my wedding ring on a beach in Kefalonia and went back six months later with a metal detector and found it. I like this form with the repeating lines, im with Milton, a Fave. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/1/2022 9:27:00 AM

Six months and you found it! That was your lucky day, Tom. Thanks for the fave and comments. It's called Monotetra.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/1/2022 8:11:00 AM

Jenna - This is absolutely masterful. I loved ever stanza. This is worthy of a trophy, P.O.T.D. or P.O.T.W. I nominate it for...whatever. I feel certain Jeff will like it. A FAVE for me.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/1/2022 8:24:00 AM

aw thanks, Milt. You're one of my favorite cheerleaders and your supportive comments are very much appreciated!

Robertina B.

Date: 6/1/2022 6:15:00 AM

Beautiful creativity Jenna! Really enjoying this.. Absolutely love the picture and monorhyme! I am intrigued by the depths of the oceans and what mysteries lurk there. Sure is fascinating! Your talent shines.. Many Blessings!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/1/2022 6:20:00 AM

Thank you very much, Robertina, for your interest and kind comments.