What Fascinates Me

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What fascinates me is we fail to see truth before our eyes and bliss beats that rise. Objects we behold, around our mind rolled, are present in space, manifest by grace. Before we exhale, to again inhale, there’s a pregnant pause, of this dream world’s cause. What fascinates me is we fail to see that we’re breathed by God, yet not overawed. Body is but dust, from Mother Earth’s crust, which we then ensoul, to play our life role. This world is but thought, that heart’s desires brought. If we be but still, voids within will fill. What fascinates me is we fail to see that we’re living light, bubbling with delight. 24-May-2022 HMS, Rhymezone Fascination and Awe Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jeff Kyser

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Date: 5/24/2022 1:06:00 PM
Your ending is spot on! "What fascinates me is we fail to see that we’re living light, bubbling with delight." Why don't we all know this? Maybe others have not meditated?
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Date: 5/24/2022 6:47:00 PM
Internalising attention is a gradual process, given the momentum of thoughts, spawned by desire and aversion, now samskara (tendency).
Date: 5/24/2022 11:11:00 AM
Did you get this idea from the ghost that roamed the cemetery>
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