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placed 3rd in Anoucheka Gangabissoon's

As I Watch the Waves Crash Contest November 14, 2023
 
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I’m mesmerized by the ocean.
Whether it’s almost silent and still
or thunderous and in turbulent motion,
I’m in awe and cannot get my fill.

The majesty of so vast a creation
overshadows each sight and sound
around me. During contemplation,      
all else simply fades into the background. 

Wading in its shallow, surging foam 
is pleasurable, but I prefer
gazing at it from a distant cliff. When I’m home,
in my mind’s eye, the waves will stir.

I don’t have to sail the “ocean blue”
or know all the life that teems within
to be mesmerized by the magnificent view 
of the ocean. Soon—I will see it again.




*"Columbus Sailed the Ocean Blue" is the title of poem by Jean Marzolo.

November 27, 2021
entered in the Wonderstruck Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

December 26, 2021
entered in A Strand (Dec 26) Poetry Contest

May 21, 2022
entered in the Fascination and Awe Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jeff Kyser

June 15, 2022
entered in the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney

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Date: 11/29/2021 4:44:00 PM
Hello Janice ... below the stillness of the ocean is a world of mystery for us on land, and this I believe is what draws us to watch and wonder its moods - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/2/2021 5:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay! Janice
Date: 11/27/2021 8:58:00 PM
A beautiful write, Janice! I love the ocean! Pandemic put a hold on our yearly cruises.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/27/2021 9:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice

Book: Reflection on the Important Things