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placed 3rd in Anoucheka Gangabissoon's

As I Watch the Waves Crash Contest November 14, 2023
 
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What Fascinates Me

I’m mesmerized by the ocean.
Whether it’s almost silent and still
or thunderous and in turbulent motion,
I’m in awe and cannot get my fill.

The majesty of so vast a creation
overshadows each sight and sound
around me. During contemplation,      
all else simply fades into the background. 

Wading in its shallow, surging foam 
is pleasurable, but I prefer
gazing at it from a distant cliff. When I’m home,
in my mind’s eye, the waves will stir.

I don’t have to sail the “ocean blue”
or know all the life that teems within
to be mesmerized by the magnificent view 
of the ocean. Soon—I will see it again.




*"Columbus Sailed the Ocean Blue" is the title of poem by Jean Marzolo.

November 27, 2021
entered in the Wonderstruck Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

December 26, 2021
entered in A Strand (Dec 26) Poetry Contest

May 21, 2022
entered in the Fascination and Awe Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jeff Kyser

June 15, 2022
entered in the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Mark Toney
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Laurie Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Hello Janice ... below the stillness of the ocean is a world of mystery for us on land, and this I believe is what draws us to watch and wonder its moods - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 8:58 PM
A beautiful write, Janice! I love the ocean! Pandemic put a hold on our yearly cruises.
Canerdy Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 9:33 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
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