What Dreams May Come

fair maiden who sails on each crested wave
drawn from the deepest ocean currents
galloping white steeds land on golden sands
within each beat, feelings growing stronger
exploring beauty within this magically universal dream
developing within every passing moon - joining with shadows we unite souls
I see a starlight shining so brightly, blinking
destinies promise to join our kingdoms
each one bringing you closer into my heart

a thousand gifts wrapped over and back
as silk-white ribbons inside out beams upon your grace
the greatest pleasure is dancing with you under the moonlight gaze

in the distance, at horizon's edge, a darkness
storm clouds approaching from the north
I see the fear in your eyes as the moon turns ebon
white steeds neigh in the wind, fearful of the tempest 
a memory?  or an omen of things to come?
you release my hand, thunder shakes our universe
lightning illuminates, casting ghostly shadows
I call to you, fair maiden, as you mount your beast
the windstorm drowns out my ardent pleas

what is this spectre that stands between us?
come back, come back o fair maiden of light
alas, the fantasy fades, I stand alone in black of night

waking up the eyes sting, salt-based
missing someone special with whom I shared once upon a time
lost inside the loneliness, nowhere to turn
stuck within a bubble of feelings
where someone will never leave or hide away
standing for a moment in the cold morning mist
listening to the crows call
haunting thoughts drift upon a cloud
with picture memories stored, deeply beautiful

the dream, the dream, it taunts me when I sleep
no longer sure of what is real and what is illusion
tonight, I will close my eyes once again and pretend-

you're still here, with me



A collaboration between Liam Mc Daid and The Seeker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/13/2016 12:19:00 PM
Fabulous collaboration Liam and Tommy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/5/2016 4:49:00 PM
Stunning Collaboration. Congrats to both authors for this superb piece.A7 Added to my fav list...
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Date: 6/27/2016 4:31:00 PM
Excellent Collaboration Liam with The Seeker. Romance through and through!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:00:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic poem, Liam and T.S. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/26/2016 3:50:00 PM
Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate,captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with the Seeker.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So profound!Just amazing! truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding imagery!Excellent collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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