What Dreams Are Made Of

In the darkened attic, cold wind hisses Drifting through mist of unfulfilled wishes. The urge to stray climbs on hurrying ticks, Cold wind hisses in the darkened attic. Keepers of light, they open her desire Promising hope, lost dream she will acquire As remnant of fear leaves the rabid night, They open her desire, keepers of light. From heart’s window, footsteps quiver To saunter onward and claim dream’s flicker Rips of long nights soon abate her sorrow, Footsteps quiver from heart’s window. Slowly her fire roams, hands pick stiff brushes Fingers tracing easels of stars’ splashes. In this world, inner passion finds true home Hands pick stiff brushes, slowly her fire roams. … . …….. . . (c) *Swap Quatrain : each stanza is a quatrain where the first line is reversed in the fourth line. Kim Merryman’s 'What Dreams are Made Of ' Contest 31 July 2012
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 8:58 PM
Isn't this swap quatrain form awesome, Nette? I have used it several times in the past and I just love it! You did a great job with it. I hope I can come up with something as nice!! Luv, Andrea
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Now guess what my dreams are made of........
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July 31, 2012 at 8:15 PM
Wow.....an amazing write Nette....just love it!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 4:38 PM
Fabulous write, Nette! I have never seen this form written like this. Love it!!! Best wishes in Kim's contest...love and blessings
Sivey Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Wow, the power of this illustrious write is so immense! You have written a wishful desire, a heartfelt cheer that roams across the window sill! You wrote a diamond amongst so many dusty trails! What a beautiful poem my friend! Great work!!
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Nette ------ my dream.....for you :)hugggs
Martinez-Rivera Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Good poem hoping for the best goodluck
Anish Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 12:12 PM
This form is somewhat similar to the Malaysian form - the pantoum. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
May Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:45 AM
lovely write Nette....thanks for stopping by ...and best wishes in the contest....always...Joseph
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Interesting work..You made it work so well..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Another beautiful work nette all the best in the contest xx
Williams Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 5:07 AM
Nette, I love the poem and the form is very good, best of luck...David
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 5:02 AM
Feel a bit sadly in this, but beautiful written Nette. - Wish you luck in contest - I have written my dream to...it is comming..... - oxox love always Anne-Lise
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