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What Does the Fox Say

when heart is broken
and wings can no longer fly
  what does the fox say?

  world turned to chaos
gays and lesbians were arise
   what does the fox say?

    terminator came
Obama provides healthcare
  what does the fox say?

   cold evening and gleam
two souls meet and turned off light
   what does the fox say

    Fra-ka-ka-ka-kaw!
Let us give them time to work it
  Hush! they need to mate.





Note//: I dedicate the sound that fox used to create when they mate; 
           "fra-kaka-kaka-kow!!!" to PS' loveliest poet, SKAT.


** 1st Place Winner**

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 4/5/2014 3:06:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win in this contest dear poet. Inspire, impart and impact more with your indelible in. wishing you many more winnings! Adeleke Adeite

Neelam Sangwai

Date: 3/31/2014 10:55:00 PM

Wow! so did the fox say. Enjoyed it a lot. Congratulations.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/1/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, Neelam.. :o))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:52:00 PM

HI AIYAH, I WUV the haiku. This contest was exciting and fun to read. What the fox say? Wa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pow! CONGRATULATIONS! Always & Forever *LINDA*

Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/1/2014 7:52:00 AM

Ha-tee-ha-tee-hooo!!! ..That's what this red fox lady wanna say... lol... THANK YOU so much, PD!!!!! .. your comment is the greatest prize I've ever received!!! ..oxoxo...^_^

Theresa Stephens

Date: 3/31/2014 12:45:00 PM

Hi Aiyah, Many congrats on your great 1st place win. Mating foxes whatever will happen next I wonder, probably keeping the neighbourhood awake with their fra-kaka-kaka-pows. .......... ah ah ah........x Theresa x.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/31/2014 12:53:00 PM

Hello Theresa... you're so cool... I love your comment.. I was wondering ,too.. lol... !!! :')0)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2014 8:42:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Way to go with creativity..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/31/2014 12:53:00 PM

Thank you SAra for this very beautiful comment!! ..;o))

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/31/2014 8:30:00 AM

Wow! very creative, awesome! Big congratulations on your grand win friend Aiyah. Have a blessed day always. hugsss ;)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/31/2014 12:54:00 PM

Thank you ,Paz!! ... I appreciate your comment and visit.. ^__^

John Beam

Date: 3/30/2014 9:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win AiyaH

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/31/2014 1:05:00 PM

Thank you so much John!! ^_^

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/30/2014 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your top placement -JT

Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2014 5:37:00 AM

Congrats Aiyah; love your foxy haiku :) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 3/30/2014 11:10:00 AM

That's a tricky one !! perhaps I ought to keep you guessing...:) :) // paul

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paul!! .. Can you please show us the real you?... i'm a bit confused if i'll treat you like a young one or an old man who needs respect.. lol.. :')) Thanks again! ^_^

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2014 5:25:00 AM

Thanks for a good humor to enjoy and congreats on the win, aiyah

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2014 7:13:00 PM

hmmm, I hope that you are saying you LIKE the obama care and they gay rights!!! If so, I LIKES this poem. Congrats.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:35:00 AM

I do... that's what the fox tells me..he he.. Thank you so much, Andie!!!! it's a precious comment... I love it!!! .:')

Skat A

Date: 3/29/2014 5:47:00 PM

"fra-kaka-kaka-kow :) Congratulations! Young Lovely Lady Love ~SKAT~

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:33:00 AM

WOOOOOW Skat!!!! ..this is amaziiiing!!! Thank you ,Dear!!! ...you hit another string in my heart!!! ...Wapapapapaappaw!!! What does the fox say???? I love you more today than yesterday!!!! whoooooooohoooo~~~~ ...happiness!!! you caused me too much!!! :'))