Aiyah Torres Poet Haiku

What Does the Fox Say

when heart is broken
and wings can no longer fly
  what does the fox say?

  world turned to chaos
gays and lesbians were arise
   what does the fox say?

    terminator came
Obama provides healthcare
  what does the fox say?

   cold evening and gleam
two souls meet and turned off light
   what does the fox say

    Fra-ka-ka-ka-kaw!
Let us give them time to work it
  Hush! they need to mate.





Note//: I dedicate the sound that fox used to create when they mate; 
           "fra-kaka-kaka-kow!!!" to PS' loveliest poet, SKAT.


** 1st Place Winner**

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Adeleke Adeite April 5, 2014 at 3:06 AM Congrats on your fine win in this contest dear poet. Inspire, impart and impact more with your indelible in. wishing you many more winnings! Adeleke Adeite

Neelam Sangwai March 31, 2014 at 10:55 PM Wow! so did the fox say. Enjoyed it a lot. Congratulations. Aiyah Torres April 1, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thank you so much, Neelam.. :o))

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2014 at 10:52 PM HI AIYAH, I WUV the haiku. This contest was exciting and fun to read. What the fox say? Wa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pow! CONGRATULATIONS! Always & Forever *LINDA* Aiyah Torres April 1, 2014 at 7:52 AM Ha-tee-ha-tee-hooo!!! ..That's what this red fox lady wanna say... lol... THANK YOU so much, PD!!!!! .. your comment is the greatest prize I've ever received!!! ..oxoxo...^_^

Theresa Stephens March 31, 2014 at 12:45 PM Hi Aiyah, Many congrats on your great 1st place win. Mating foxes whatever will happen next I wonder, probably keeping the neighbourhood awake with their fra-kaka-kaka-pows. .......... ah ah ah........x Theresa x. Aiyah Torres March 31, 2014 at 12:53 PM Hello Theresa... you're so cool... I love your comment.. I was wondering ,too.. lol... !!! :')0)

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2014 at 8:42 AM Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Way to go with creativity..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara Aiyah Torres March 31, 2014 at 12:53 PM Thank you SAra for this very beautiful comment!! ..;o))

Bukang Liwayway March 31, 2014 at 8:30 AM Wow! very creative, awesome! Big congratulations on your grand win friend Aiyah. Have a blessed day always. hugsss ;) Aiyah Torres March 31, 2014 at 12:54 PM Thank you ,Paz!! ... I appreciate your comment and visit.. ^__^

John Beam March 30, 2014 at 9:22 PM Congrats on your win AiyaH Aiyah Torres March 31, 2014 at 1:05 PM Thank you so much John!! ^_^

Honestly J.T. March 30, 2014 at 12:27 PM Congratulations on your top placement -JT

Paul Callus March 30, 2014 at 5:37 AM Congrats Aiyah; love your foxy haiku :) // paul Paul Callus March 30, 2014 at 11:10 AM That's a tricky one !! perhaps I ought to keep you guessing...:) :) // paul Aiyah Torres March 30, 2014 at 9:44 AM Thank you so much, Paul!! .. Can you please show us the real you?... i'm a bit confused if i'll treat you like a young one or an old man who needs respect.. lol.. :')) Thanks again! ^_^

Dr.Ram Mehta March 30, 2014 at 5:25 AM Thanks for a good humor to enjoy and congreats on the win, aiyah

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2014 at 7:13 PM hmmm, I hope that you are saying you LIKE the obama care and they gay rights!!! If so, I LIKES this poem. Congrats. Aiyah Torres March 30, 2014 at 9:35 AM I do... that's what the fox tells me..he he.. Thank you so much, Andie!!!! it's a precious comment... I love it!!! .:')

Skat A March 29, 2014 at 5:47 PM "fra-kaka-kaka-kow :) Congratulations! Young Lovely Lady Love ~SKAT~ Aiyah Torres March 30, 2014 at 9:33 AM WOOOOOW Skat!!!! ..this is amaziiiing!!! Thank you ,Dear!!! ...you hit another string in my heart!!! ...Wapapapapaappaw!!! What does the fox say???? I love you more today than yesterday!!!! whoooooooohoooo~~~~ ...happiness!!! you caused me too much!!! :'))

Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 3:14 PM - Bravo ... bravo ... this was the top of the list,AiyaH ! - Good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)) Aiyah Torres February 28, 2014 at 3:50 PM lol...but i enjoyed the sounds ...though the lyrics..uhm...i don't know..maybe you're right! ..lol...ty! .^__^ Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2014 at 3:33 PM (The boys who sing are from Norway .... a "stupid and crazy" song :)))) Aiyah Torres February 28, 2014 at 3:30 PM lol...this just came from nowhere, Anne-Lise...thank you!!! ...i don't know what kind of spirit entered on my body today ...lol ..^__^

Dah Dahlusion February 28, 2014 at 12:24 PM Oh, my, this is unique beyond words. Bravo, Poet! Aiyah Torres February 28, 2014 at 12:49 PM Thank you, Dah... :')) ..

David Williams February 28, 2014 at 12:00 PM Aiyah very well done I like these...David Aiyah Torres February 28, 2014 at 12:48 PM thank you, Williams...i'm so glad that you liked it! ..^__^