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What Doctor Jekyll Hides

In the office, he smiles so charmingly. Saying and doing all the right things, he puts all his female patients completely at ease. Even the women hard to please return to him, for he is famous for his bedside manner. He surrounds himself with a staff of beautiful nurses who rush eagerly to his aid when he needs them. Each of them, whether single or not, imagines herself with him and how it would be to be alone with him, aboard his fancy yacht submerged in the mesmerizing gaze of his warm hazel eyes. In the evening he goes home to his wife, a lovely though docile woman, fragile like a flower. Immediately on seeing her, he starts in with his usual barrage of complaints, belittling her and poking fun at her homemaking skills, the dinners she has waiting for him, her style of dress, and every minor physical flaw she might possess. She accepts it all with her pretty blonde head bowed like that of a wilted lily, for she knows that to oppose him will only result in a more tangible type of abuse, and he is always careful when he hurts her. Doctor that he is, he knows well to leave no marks. She retires quietly to bed, worried little about any sexual advances toward her. Although she longs for the touch of a man, she is grateful to be left alone by her spouse. Meanwhile, with liquor in hand, he’s gone into the den, shutting the door behind himself. Logged on as Mr. Hyde at his favorite website, he peruses the myriads of Adonises available, peering salaciously at each nude explicit photo with wide hungry hazel eyes taking in every little detail as he plans his next big adventure out of town and fantasizes trysts on his fancy private yacht with the sexiest of the men that he can solicit. posted 2/21/12 Submitted 9/23/22 For One From The Dark Side Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 10/17/2020 12:02:00 AM
Truly a Jekyll and Hyde personality that Stevenson wrote of, with a charming persona hiding (Hyding?) an abusive monster. Loved the pun in your title, too.
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Date: 10/15/2015 9:42:00 PM
Andrea, nice HM. SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:28:00 AM
as he plans his next big adventure out of town.....Hope the good doctor doesn't come here....Congratulations ....
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:07:00 PM
NEVER SAW THAT ENDING COMING. Great poem and congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/14/2015 8:23:00 AM
Great write Andrea, nice twist at the end.
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:47:00 PM
Wonderful take on the theme Andrea with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:26:00 PM
I did not see that twist come. Caught me totally off guard. What a great story teller. Congrats.
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Date: 10/13/2015 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem. These kind of people exist this a shame to say. Good description.
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Date: 10/13/2015 9:35:00 PM
good one' thank you. nate
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Date: 6/15/2015 9:20:00 PM
Congrats on you win Andrea :)
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Date: 6/15/2015 7:37:00 PM
WOW, that's mighty awesome that Kelly had more than 4 number ones. Don't you agree Andrea? Or, does it bother you to be placed with so many number ones? I for one place how many I desire, because it's all in the name of good poetry fun. I enjoy the special features we have. It makes me sense, why others take this so personal and need to Blog it! It seems as if they are the ones taking this contest to personal. It's all for the love of writing. HUGS and Congrats
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Date: 6/15/2015 9:51:00 PM
YES< Skat, I SO agree with you. they do not host their own contests, and yet they continually post blogs griping about us judges. I'd like to smack them (and not with a kiss!!) and they actually have the gall to complain if we do not give them an HM?? A lot of poets tell me they feel insulted to get an HM. Do we have to send out opinion surveys on how they would like their losses: HM or N/A? good grief, I already give LOTS of wins and now one guy is complaining the judges give too MANY wins. WEll, as John Fogerty wrote, "you can't please everyone so you gotta please yourself."
Date: 6/15/2015 7:23:00 AM
This brilliant piece certainly came from the very depths of the dark side lurking in the shadows. Congratulations on another brilliant write and superb win! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
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Date: 6/14/2015 5:41:00 PM
This captivating poem just drew me in each time I read it... A true tale from the dark side! Congrats on a first place win, Andrea!
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Date: 3/10/2012 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:35:00 AM
The first twist in tale was expected but not the second one, this man is sure to burn in hell:) Excellent write!! Congrats Andrea on your big win. Love...
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
This sounds as if more truth than fiction, unfortunately, and brilliantly portrayed! Congrats, Andrea...well done!
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Date: 3/9/2012 10:14:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win, love the idea of Mr. Hyde logging on....David
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Date: 3/9/2012 9:22:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a stupedous first place win for this dramatic write on the theme .. famtastic one.. luv.. so honored to be sharing first with u ..
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:27:00 AM
Yes what a tale/tail and with alot of truth! Truths I wish our Andi knew nothing of...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:17:00 AM
wow, this is powerful stuff Andrea, almost angry, yet wonderful to read, so much truth here, a imagination that reaches all corners of life. Oh and congrats. harry
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:56:00 PM
That DirtY Dog Private Dick! I am digging yir' stuff quite a bit lately. OH! Help. I NEED to be on the wrecking ball brink of destroying RHYMING!!! The Crap haunts me like looping 45'' record players, the words could also be 33" vinyl! HA! You remember Record players! Oh, and THANK u for the help on identifying couplets. I love it! PLEASE, If you ever see a poem of mine that is named to a wrong FORM....Please Tell me. I am a self-proclaimed form Slacker! If I knew the forms Id do more contests
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Date: 2/24/2012 2:37:00 PM
WoW! An old but often too true tale of woe. Too many of us live with a man who never says a kind or complimentary word but let him be dis-satisfied and he is just full of all kinds of adjectives. As for this twisted sister preferring men, go for it, if he were to hit one of them they can hit back just as hard. heheheh Nice job here. Good imagery, great story line, well worded. and holds the reader. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/23/2012 7:01:00 AM
Andrea -- More more! I'm so glad you post different poems here than at PFT. This had my heart palpitating. ONe of your best, I think. love Kathy
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:03:00 PM
Why do I get the feeling that this story has been played out by men all across America over and over and over again?...You are masterful at writing this entry...What a sick man you wrote into this plot..Yes, the essence of my ex-spouse. ha ha. just kidding. Love it! Gwendolen
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