What Do You Tell Such a Son

What do you tell a son 
   who leaves for a far-away place
To build a life with his new wife
   to carve out space to run his race
      What do you tell such a son

What do you tell a son 
   You love too much to hold back
Yet try to tell him that
   and your voice just cracks
      What do you tell such a son  

What do you tell a son
   who's made big plans
in whose happiness way 
   you never would stand
      What do you tell such a son...

What do you tell a son
   who comes crawling back home
on his hands and his knees
   who says, "I failed, Dad. 
      Forgive me, please."
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Date: 12/11/2019 9:51:00 AM
Welcome home son, hugs and understandings . . . :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/11/2019 1:37:00 PM
Acceptance is always a wonderful path... :) gw
Date: 12/9/2019 10:52:00 AM
Like Kurt I thought of the prodigal. This reminds me that God feels like this about us. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:47:00 PM
Wow. So nice to see your avatar. Miss your poetry. Hope all is well. Thanks, Gershon
Date: 12/9/2019 8:43:00 AM
So beautiful... so very sad... failing is not failing.. it is just trying the first time. Brush off, get up... "fly.....".... A lovely piece my friend. You always provide a wonderful read with my coffee. Blessings on your day. Ann
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:46:00 PM
Enjoy the coffee, Ann! Peace and Joy, Gershon
Date: 12/9/2019 3:33:00 AM
I agree with Kurt, and I know you do also. A lovely poem, my friend. I hope all is well.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Caren, and all is well. :) gw
Date: 12/9/2019 3:11:00 AM
Quick! Bring the best robe and put it on my son. Put a ring on his finger and sandals on his feet. Bring the fattened calf and kill it. Let’s have a feast and celebrate. P.S.: Hi, poet. Long time no see.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:45:00 PM
Likewise… Of course with that avatar --- Have I ever seen you, O Poet?! Peace and Joy, Gershon
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Ann Foster
Date: 12/9/2019 8:44:00 AM
So true my friend... so true...
Date: 12/8/2019 10:54:00 PM
I would tell him Its ok you failed I still love you reguardless. Not sure what you would say. Thanks for sharing this my friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:43:00 PM
I intentionally did not write my answer. Left it up to you... Thanks, Gregory! :) gw
Date: 12/8/2019 10:06:00 PM
A very touching poem, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/9/2019 12:42:00 PM
Glad to hear this touched you Line and thanks for letting me know. Seasonal Happiness! ~ Gershon
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