What Do You Feel
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Written March 15, 2025 for Rick Parise's contest What do you feel
Prompt -
[] Upon a ridge In misty blue A lone tree Sways in song Dew drops Race A morning chill Calls Upon the dawn Season's change Rearrange A flowers dream Is gone A skyward gaze A quiet place Reflecting A long lost song
I feel the thrill of word windmill
Splashing down spine refreshing chill
Of whimsical rhyme making me relive
A simpler time this penning gives
Seasons change just as people do
Who is to blame for being blue
As life as sky as astronomers night
A tune that blooms in hearts in eyes
I feel salty as deep green sea
For it sings softly of lost loving
And I’m coughing up a cold breeze
Pressed roses and coffee comfort me
Copyright © Karen Jones | Year Posted 2025
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