Written March 15, 2025 for Rick Parise's contest What do you feel
Prompt - [] Upon a ridge In misty blue A lone tree Sways in song Dew drops Race A morning chill Calls Upon the dawn Season's change Rearrange A flowers dream Is gone A skyward gaze A quiet place Reflecting A long lost song I feel the thrill of word windmill Splashing down spine refreshing chill Of whimsical rhyme making me relive A simpler time this penning gives Seasons change just as people do Who is to blame for being blue As life as sky as astronomers night A tune that blooms in hearts in eyes I feel salty as deep green sea For it sings softly of lost loving And I’m coughing up a cold breeze Pressed roses and coffee comfort me
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