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Written March 15, 2025 for Rick Parise's contest What do you feel 

Prompt - [] Upon a ridge In misty blue A lone tree Sways in song Dew drops Race A morning chill Calls Upon the dawn Season's change Rearrange A flowers dream Is gone A skyward gaze A quiet place Reflecting A long lost song I feel the thrill of word windmill Splashing down spine refreshing chill Of whimsical rhyme making me relive A simpler time this penning gives Seasons change just as people do Who is to blame for being blue As life as sky as astronomers night A tune that blooms in hearts in eyes I feel salty as deep green sea For it sings softly of lost loving And I’m coughing up a cold breeze Pressed roses and coffee comfort me

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Date: 3/17/2025 6:55:00 PM
You have become 'one' with nature and color, Karen. Remarkable!
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 7:34:00 PM
What a nice compliment! You have made me smile Gershon! I appreciate that!
Date: 3/16/2025 3:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem Karen. The imagery is wonderful
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/16/2025 6:23:00 AM
Oliver I appreciate your kind comment!

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