What Do Old Men Do

Cupid's arrow blaze a path
leading to my lonely heart
to catch a ride on your wings
what do old men do?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 2, 2016 at 12:01 AM
Mary, well done. LINDA
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August 11, 2015 at 5:59 PM
MARY, this is a good read, thanks for sharing..... **SKAT**
Simmons Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours. Thank you so much for the love you showed towards my Poem The Homeless Are Human Too. I often do this Poem on the Grand Central Shuttle here in New York City....A very nice poem you have composed here. I'm off to ingest another. Be Faithful and Blessed/Uno
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 3:28 PM
I'm beginning to find out. Vince
Neels Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Yours is too cute Mary, it made me smile this morning ;)
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Very cute, Mary. I doubt the old men are up for hitching a ride on Cupid's wings. Wishing you success in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 3:13 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest, Mary
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 11:27 PM
Oh, this is so cute, mary.
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