What Did God Do On the Seventh Day

The Good Book tells us that God rested on The Seventh Day,
To unwind upon His Throne and His handiwork survey.
He foresaw the mess we mere mortals would make of things,
Abetted by all humankind to include politicians and ruling kings!

Right off the bat, Adam and Eve made a stupid mistake,
Eating forbidden fruit persuaded by that nefarious snake!
They let God down big time and I reckon them we can blame,
For wrecking His noble plans and creating eternal shame!

God must have pondered about the fate of His wondrous Creation.
He envisaged pain and suffering as nation warred against nation.
As He relaxed on That Day He foresaw evil and sinfulness,
Hunger, strife, mans' inhumanity to man and homelessness.

How He must have agonized That Day as He eyed His Universe,
Knowing He would have to cope with a people so wicked and perverse.
I suspect He would have preferred a day of rest like most of us men,
Savoring a pepperoni pizza and watching a football game on ESPN!

Entry for Curtis Moorman's "What Did God Do On The Seventh Day" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Congrats on your win, Robert. Well penned.
Hinshaw Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Thank you, Line. I just hope God has a sense of humor!
Hinshaw Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thank you Carolyn. Hope the Good Lord will forgive me for a bit of jesting in the last 2 lines, but I suspect he has a sense of humor. Best to you - love - Bob
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your win in Curtis's contest, Bob! So well deserved. Hugs, Carolyn
Radke Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Hi Bob. I love this take of what God did on the 7th day, especially the mention of politicians. I imagine they’re causing Him not a few headaches right now. Your closing lines are priceless. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Deb
Hinshaw Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Thank you so much, Deb. I hope the Good Lord will not take offense with such nonsense but hope it gave Him a smile!
Vaso Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:14 AM
Enjoyed this, to be serious in life, we need to be able to laugh! This was amazing!
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 7:03 PM
Good one, Robert. I like your perspective on this challenge.
Devonshire Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Hi Robert, this is terrific! I love the whimsical tone of your entry for Curtis's contest. Had a great laugh thinking of God enjoying a game of football on ESPN. Wishing you success in the contest, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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October 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thank you, Carolyn. I hope the Good Lord will forgive me for being a bit irreverent but I hope it gave Him a smile. Thanks for dropping by and glad you enjoyed. Bob
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