What Concerns Me

i try often not to give advice cause it;s not always wise
       not everyone wants to hear your opinion on how to live their lives
so pay attention to yourself for this i do advise
instead of focusing on everyone else 
for yourself will leave you otherwise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 22, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Hi Robert, this is very deep.. Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
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June 20, 2014 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. an enjoyable piece
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June 16, 2014 at 4:51 PM
A VERY clever write, Robert ... and ... TRUE! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Jack C
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