Andrea Dietrich Poet Tail-rhyme

What Bliss the Summer Brings

Waken to lilac’s scent at dawn;
cool off with sprinklers on the lawn.
What joy in simple things!

See sunset, holding someone’s hand
as waves roll in to kiss the sand.
What bliss the summer brings.

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 10:55 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Andrea. Love Carol

Luke Irwin December 5, 2012 at 7:31 PM Now I miss summer even more. Very nice

Heather Ober December 5, 2012 at 12:29 PM I love the scent of lilacs. One of my very favourite smells! Great write - Congratulations :)

Modupe Sefunmi December 5, 2012 at 4:56 AM Love this poem! Congrats on your win!

Vicky Tsiluma December 4, 2012 at 11:31 PM This is such a happy write - lovely. Congrats on your win Andrea!

Joyce Johnson December 4, 2012 at 11:31 PM If we had soummer all year round would such bliss in it be found? Copngratulations Andrea. Love, joyce

Olusegun Arowolo December 4, 2012 at 11:16 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win and wonderful write,my friend.keep flying...xoxo..

Yanny Widjanarko December 4, 2012 at 5:09 PM Andrea congrats on your big win in this contest :D

Poet Destroyer A December 4, 2012 at 4:56 PM Andrea, congrats with your awesome win in Susan's contest..pd

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2012 at 3:27 PM Congrats on your great win...Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 4, 2012 at 1:24 PM Another stunner Andy . I love summer , Congratulations xx

Jon A Cavanaugh December 4, 2012 at 10:52 AM What a wonderful first place win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2012 at 9:03 AM congrats Andrea on a first place win for this awesome poem ..so lovely luv..

Joseph May December 4, 2012 at 9:00 AM congrats on your super win Andrea

Victoria Anderson-Throop December 4, 2012 at 8:26 AM Lilacs are one of my favorite scents! brings back wonderful memories! Congratulations on a fine win!

Richard Lamoureux December 4, 2012 at 7:34 AM Way to go!

Kash Poet December 4, 2012 at 7:29 AM What a bliss to share the top spot with you!!Congrats!

Gwendolen Song December 4, 2012 at 7:28 AM What a picture of a romantic summer...you even got the waves and the sand involved romantically...This is very very well done. Congrats on this poem's success, Andrea. :) gwendolen

Yanny Widjanarko December 4, 2012 at 7:06 AM Congrats for your big win Andrea, this is really a great poem :)

Bukang Liwayway December 4, 2012 at 7:03 AM BIG Congratulations on your grand win friend Adrea for this very awesome poem of yours. Cheers!!!!!!!!

Sara Kendrick November 2, 2011 at 11:54 AM Enjoyed reading your work..I don't know how that I missed it..Thanks for faithfully stopping by...Sara

James Foulk August 19, 2011 at 9:49 PM how true, a great write, enjoyed. thank you for commenting on Just a name on a tombstone. your ideal is great, just might do that. i have thinking which poems to put in a book and my poems from the past seem to please most people.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2011 at 4:42 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Jack Horne August 7, 2011 at 11:12 AM Quick congrats before I get logged out again!

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 6:53 AM this really bliss, my heartie andie... a joy to read with matching congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs

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