What Am I-Niagara-W

I am the Antiope of Canada, Amazonian, but not breast less, Snowy bosom like virginal gems, Swelling lips moderately full, Savoury odor felt all around, Crystalline throat striking the eyes. Meandering, churning, darting, dashing, Transformed from blonde to brunette. Here alluring, benign, attenuated, There corpulent, colossal, capering, Practicing calisthenics all the time. Raquel Welch in ‘One Million Years B.C.’ Wily Cleopatra, the Scythian of Ordzhonikidze, Carnal Marilyn, matured Helen of Troy, Venus in Aries, Mars in Pisces. Broad bellied, middle-aged, deep, Now bulging belle of Detroit, Encircling the wooing Windsor, Yet the Blithe spirit of Pelee Island.
============================== March 15, 2014 Dr. Ram Mehta Form: Free Verse Eighth Place Win Contest What Am I by PD I have used: Personification,Alliteration, Hyperbole, simile, metaphor and synecdoche :
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Torres Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 7:36 AM
the most wonderful piece ...you are a master... an idol!! ..Congratulations, Dr. Mehta!!! ^__^
Arowolo Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Wonderful piece from a talented poet..Congrats on your win...
Hamilton Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 9:27 PM
hi Ram congrats on win hugs
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March 15, 2014 at 7:09 PM
A very though provoking read Dr Ram, congratulations on the win...I am intrigued to know the answer...H
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March 15, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Hi Dr. , Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~
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March 15, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Dr Ram , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Jewels of the Crown". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:16 PM
A lot of the entries said they used personification, but I didn't see any. In yours, it is magnificent. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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August 21, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Debbie;'s contest with this brilliant write.. enjoy my friend.. ciao..luv..
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August 18, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Dr. Ram, If you get a chance, please checkout my Doctor Phobia quickie contest. Love, Carolyn
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August 18, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Wonderful Dr. Ram! Very unique. I really enjoyed your last two stanza twists.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 7:21 PM
WHEW, what robert said! and I would not even attempt all this , Dr. Ram. I can't write free verse for the life of me. Very interesting how you covered so many of her elements. Good luck, my friend. LUv, Andrea
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August 17, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Whew! That is excellent Dr.... Great free verse and education at the same time. Thanks for sharing and looks like a winner to me!
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August 17, 2010 at 2:03 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Reads like a sure winner...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing.. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara
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August 17, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Enjoyed your personified interpretation of the great Niagara, Dr. Ram. You had me laughing a lot in the last two verses. Very good! Love, Carolyn
Hill Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 1:23 PM
well done....TAH
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August 17, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Interesting outlook to one of nature's wonder! Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
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August 17, 2010 at 6:38 AM
this is wonderful! Thanks for your comment on my recent post, appreciated as always! Carol
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