What Am I You Must Think

I creep in through the darkness
And you can feel I’m there
You may be threatened by my starkness
Though I never meant to scare

You can’t see me in the daylight
But you will see what I have done
And you can seal yourself in airtight
Or maybe even run

You really have to take me
For who I really am
I really have to stay free
And uncatchable yes I am

Most of you have seen
The things that I can do
Things are not so green
When I make you feel so blue

I just may have you thinking
That I am some kind of crook
If you’ll stop your eyes from blinking
You can read me like a book

You can feel me every winter
What am I you must think
No I’m not a splinter
Have I got you on the brink

I only have one name
And I think that you all know
If it’s all the same
It’s time for me to show

I make water into ice
Even stop a rivers flow
Sometimes I am not nice
I am the COLD and now you know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/10/2010 11:29:00 AM
this poem was very good all the while i was reading it i kept thinking what is it, snow is what i thought i was close but no cigar, i really enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/5/2010 3:04:00 AM
You have really hit your stride with this well written epic poem. Into my favs with this one.
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