Sarita Milliner Poet Rhyme

What Am I

What Am I?


I’m a castle in the sky, with window into the human mind,
Walls of fabricated fiction, created strictly by design. 
My words are non-existent, void of all sound,
Blurred vision of hallucinations keeps me spellbound.
What Am I?
I’m a fantasy dream at night and an illusion by day,
I’ll keep you on your toes, in the most unusual way.
A phantom inventor, full of ingenuity and skill,
Enough to craft a picture that might make you shrill.
What Am I?
I’m a figment of your imagination!!!!!!

Written By: Sarita A. Milliner © 1/30/16
Submitted for the poetry contest: Who am I? Or, What am I?
Sponsored by: SKAT A

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Pashang Salehi February 10, 2016 at 4:31 PM You are my beautiful friend Sarita, with a beautiful name. Your words combed the fibers of my heart, like the moth to the flame with much pride. Congratulations... Sarita Milliner February 10, 2016 at 5:15 PM I appreciate your kind words and the congratulations, Pashang!!

Poet Destroyer A February 10, 2016 at 9:11 AM Thank you for the reply...

Poet Destroyer A February 9, 2016 at 11:53 PM Sarita, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Sarita Milliner February 10, 2016 at 7:05 AM Thanks, Linda!!

Skat A February 9, 2016 at 11:32 PM Sarita, Congrats on the who I am taks! Thanks for supporting another PD contest. through SK Sarita Milliner February 10, 2016 at 7:02 AM OMG, thanks!

Probir Gupta February 1, 2016 at 8:48 AM Nice write. Enjoyed reading.... Sarita Milliner February 1, 2016 at 11:10 AM Thank you Propir!

Richard Lamoureux February 1, 2016 at 8:35 AM Are you clouds??? Whatever you are I enjoyed this piece. This is very artistically expressed. Good luck in the contest. Sarita Milliner February 1, 2016 at 8:44 AM I am whatever you think I am, Richard! Many thanks for the compliment!!

Arthur Vaso January 31, 2016 at 11:54 PM I really loved how you did this, very creative! :) Sarita Milliner February 1, 2016 at 8:46 AM Glad that you enjoyed it Arthur, thanks!!

Archana Garg January 31, 2016 at 5:43 AM Beautifully penned.. Sarita Milliner February 1, 2016 at 8:47 AM Thank you very much, Archana!!