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What Am I

I host thousands of creatures And whisper to merry travelers, spraying their furrowed faces with comfort. My storms are wild and deathly. I connect. I disassemble. I bring life. I kiss sand in intervals, blue, green, brown, white- I survive Despite the debris thrown inside of me. What Am I? For PD's "What Am I" Contest.

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/19/2014 2:54:00 PM

Very interesting...Enjoyed it...Wind...Best wishes from India...

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/18/2014 1:00:00 PM

Yes, a nice poem read now. Very ldeep philosophical too. Loved always, my poetess friend, bl

Henry Victor

Date: 3/17/2014 12:05:00 PM

A good puzzle! Well done Juli-Michelle!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/16/2014 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , juli

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/15/2014 9:23:00 PM

Juli hi congrats on win hugs

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 2:16:00 PM

Juli, Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2014 1:20:00 PM

Juli, , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA

Norma Arana

Date: 3/10/2014 3:54:00 AM

Fascinated by your play of images that I would like to guess what you are. Marvelous work here, Juli-Michelle. Grateful for acknowledging my entry for your rhyme contest; it encourages me to write more often. Thank you!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2014 2:36:00 PM

Wow........this is mysterious, and I love that it leaves so much to our imagination. Well done, Juli Michelle!! And thanks too, very much for my placement in your latest rhyme contest. My honor to be among the winners!!

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/9/2014 10:34:00 AM

Great write Juli! poetic ebb & flow! 7 My best, chuck

James Kelley

Date: 3/8/2014 5:48:00 PM

Something I've never been able to live out of driving distance from...I love the ocean..only place that really feels like home to me. I really enjoyed this. -J