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What Am I

I am a malicious whim Born of ignorance Bred into mindlessness Nothing if not perverse Dark and detrimental Leaving utmost carnage In my wake and defying Humility and compassion I will take you to where You would laugh in staccato Or feel somewhat smug Exploring your relief But you won't win with me Your bad karma will hunt You down and haunt your Dreams amidst self turmoil! What am I ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2014 6:15:00 PM
Wow Deb....this is excellent! Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 3/17/2014 7:19:00 AM
Wow!! ...i'm clueless... this is awesome ,Deb!! ..Congratulations!! ^__^
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , deb
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Date: 3/15/2014 3:40:00 PM
Smacks of the detrimental effects of prejudicial hate that come to bite us in the ass in the end.
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Date: 3/15/2014 2:34:00 PM
good write Deb congrats on win hugs
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Date: 3/15/2014 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations Deb... An awesome win... SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:00:00 PM
Deb, , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:01:00 PM
awesome poem!
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Date: 9/19/2010 12:09:00 PM
WOW! ENOYED YOUR POEM*~SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:24:00 AM
Have to agree with Andrea-- Wow was the first thought that popped to mind too-- and you sure did well in portraying gossip here Deb-- nikko :)
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:58:00 PM
wow, this is really a surprise ending poem. Awesome idea! Luv, Andrea
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