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What Am I?

After being charged,denied everyone feasted,Governor had imprisoned Jesus,King, Laughing men neared, openly Pilate queried reason,shrouded thorns unveiled vengeance waned, xenophobes yoking zealots. phhhhhew.....

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2009 1:10:00 PM

touch huh! Not much to do with that x & z LOL. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/6/2009 9:16:00 PM

This is vey challenging! Good theme, excellent write, Richard! Peace and love, audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/5/2009 4:37:00 PM

great poem, phew indeed!!

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/5/2009 7:26:00 AM

The Crucifixion of Jesus Christ...Very creative my love ...superbly done! Hugs~Mary

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/4/2009 2:56:00 PM

deep write indeed--Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2009 5:12:00 AM

Another great ABC Richard.. u write them with ease... of course, He is the King of Kings and Lord of Lords... luv how all your words flow into each other in their message... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 9:44:00 PM

This seems to be quite difficult...... You did it well.....:JP]

Marty Owens

Date: 12/3/2009 7:54:00 PM

I tried this form and mine sounded weird...Haven't tried again lol...This one is nice...Enjoyed...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2009 3:40:00 PM

Interesting write. I bet that one was not easy. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mine that you commented on called "Old Man Of Shorr" is on an island near Scotland. Thanks for the comments. Sara