What Aileth Thee

WHAT AILETH THEE?? 

What aileth thee, my soul, that thou art sad? 
Why have thine words stopped pouring out in pain? 
Why doth thou from poetry now abstain? 
Wherefore art thou in melancholy clad? 
Thou knowest that sans words, thou wilt turn mad, 
Tell me how to make thee cheery and sane ~
                                     What aileth thee? 

Look at others around thee, aren't they glad? 
Why not, for once, let words have their free reign? 
Then thou wilt feel such joy thou can't contain, 
Don't live on subtractions, just let smiles add ~
                                     What aileth thee? 



20th October, 2022


For Jeff Kyser's "Rousing Rondine" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/22/2022 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jo! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2022 7:15:00 PM
"Don't live on subtractions, just let smiles add" - Beautiful.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2022 6:45:00 AM
Very creative, and I love the old English style, congratulations
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2022 5:03:00 AM
Why not, for once, let words have their free reign? And yes, I know, the idiom is "free rein", but words are so much more than horses! I am stuck in a dry spell, and this one really spoke to me, and I like the "old english" style as well. Congrats, Jo, on your 2nd place finish.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/5/2022 12:31:00 PM
Jo, I hear echoes of Psalm 42 in this write - "why so downcast, O my soul; why so disturbed deep within me?" Your Shakespearean language here gives a King James Bible vibe to this poem. I just love the line "Don't live on subtractions, just let smiles add". I am curious if you have been suffering a long dry spell, or maybe life has been overwhelming. In any case, I am overjoyed to read your wonderful writing again, and I trust all is well in your world. What a talent you have; thank you so much for sharing it with us. Blessings ~ John
Login to Reply
Date: 10/20/2022 4:45:00 AM
Very nice!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter