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What a Wonderful Life

Every day I sit watching and waiting the next move I'm anticipating abrupt sudden and throws me off course like ships in the night we pass only the tears telling the true story of our love who is it that I've become I look into the mirror only seeing my tear stained cheeks Is this the peak of it all downhill I will fall Further into the abyss only hurting each other never stopping to wonder if any of this is real we were so young back then even when we were just kids not knowing what was happening but ending up terrified of the future bound together forever now all grown up and looking back what was it all for the laughs and the cries was it all worth it in the end when I felt like I wanted to hide now I never stopping to think twice what a wonderful life

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Date: 5/10/2017 1:58:00 PM
Amazing write Savannah. I wuv chu so much and I am so glad you joined Poetry soup!!!! Go to my inbox on the left hand menu and you will get a message from me soon, this is a way to chat while we are in schools. I love you and am so glad you joined Poetry soup. I hope you find this website as amazing as I do!!!
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Savannah Seid
Date: 5/11/2017 10:51:00 PM
Hey Im so sorry I didnt see this till today!
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Date: 5/10/2017 1:59:00 PM
it wont let me mail you yet, you didnt confirm you email adress first.

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