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What a Waste

goodbye you said to me like it was nothing- goodbye i say to you because it is nothing. no worries, i got it covered, i took control & left them all smothered, sprawled in the hall. i stole these words from your language, respoke, taken lightly (just a joke) i can't see through all the smoke; can't seem to forget what brought me here in the first place. what a waste everyone says, monotone & dull, everyone expected i would get infected- upon disease, i surrender, fall to my knees & quiver. goodbye you said to me like it was nothing- goodbye i say to you because it is nothing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/22/2010 11:39:00 AM
I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Rachel. Love, Carol
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Book: Shattered Sighs